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lightprincess14
2009-09-15 . chapter 23
Ok I got to say that this story is one of the two stories I love the most! Your writing is so neat and detailed. I just love this story. everything about it makes you want to read more and more. I never wanted to stop reading!PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL! It's so good I can't stop talking about it. On my story, Another Century Another Generation, i give shoutouts to different authors! I am so putting you as my author shoutout on my story. Don't stop writing you have a gift!!

lightprincess14
The Raging Blue Flame
2009-05-15 . chapter 1
I lol'd on your comment about the Estrogen Ocean. Although I wish you made Seiya, Yaten, and Taiki female I'll keep on reading!
SailorMoonFighter
2009-03-26 . chapter 12
ROFLAMO at the bit with the little old lady, that was classic!
I bet ya that Minako is either pregant or has cancer. Really good stuff.

Love ya loads
SailorMoonFighter
Armageddon Angel
2009-03-01 . chapter 23
Yeah, it was kind of weird to have Haruka and Michiru end the story. But, I'll get over it.

As for the story itself, it's great. It takes into account the varying relationships between the Earth Senshi and the Starlights. Keeping the Starlights in male form was something that I was iffy about but it did come together.

If there is one thing that I kind of had a problem with, it's that you had way too many pairings. You had Usa/Mamo, Ami/Taiki, Mina/Yaten, Seiya/Kaky, Haru/Michi etc... And the problem that comes with that is that all authors, not just you, have a hard time giving each pairing equal focus. I saw that, in all, the Mina/Yaten pairing got the most fleshing with the abortion and the pain thereafter, and the Ami/Taiki got the least. Multiple pairings are the hardest to do correctly but other than that, the story did come out nicely.

So congratulations on making it to the end.

P.S. I just realized that all of the chapters began with an R. Yay on me.
Girl Who Writes
2009-02-25 . chapter 21
I just reread it and I love it so much. Are you still planning a sequel?
fall3n-ros3s
2009-02-12 . chapter 23
Done!
Wow this is THE BEST Sailor Moon fanfic I've ever read. Seriously. Possibly the best fanfic I've read period. Words cannot describe how much I enjoyed your story. I think this should totally be turned into the sixth season of Sailor Moon. That would be so uber amazing! I don't think I've laughed, cried, or had as many heart attacks as I did reading anything else, ever. I'm so sad it's done. This has been my life for the past two weeks and now it's over. *Sobs* Please publish the sequel soon! I'll be waiting! You're an fantastic writer and keep up the good work!

fall3n-ros3s

P.S sorry for the massive amounts of review; I couldn't help it! ^.^
Crystalinchen
2009-02-04 . chapter 23
Excellent story!
Can't wait for the sequel^^
fall3n-ros3s
2009-02-02 . chapter 21
The last section of this chapter was so beautiful and poetic. Only two more to go. =(
fall3n-ros3s
2009-02-02 . chapter 20
I know I've probably said this before, but this is my fav chapter! The snow ball fight was epic. Yaten and Seiya and Haruka are downright hilarious. I love Seiya's childish immaturity. And Haruka and Yaten's love-hate relationship. Oh my. Omg I'm going to remember these lines forever:

“This isn’t a war!” yelled Yaten. “It’s a ** MASSACRE!”

“The snow-covered shrimp shall not frighten us!” exclaimed Seiya.

“Oh, Yaten’s a man today,” she replied with a smirk, “but for him, gender’s more of an accessory, you see. He changes his sex as often as he changes his shirt.”

“I guess so, but listening to this is more painful than hearing Taiki recite poetry.”

Your story just totally made my day. ^.^
fall3n-ros3s
2009-02-02 . chapter 19
Yay happy chapters! You have no idea how depressed I felt these last five chapters, and when Seiya hugged Yaten and the mood became joking again, it was like the cloud of gloom was suddenly gone. Haha. I really like how you made closure in this chapter in Seiya and Kakyuu's conversation, with letting go of the past and moving on; it really ties the whole thing together.
fall3n-ros3s
2009-02-01 . chapter 18
This chapter was probably the most heart-wrenching thing I've ever read. I bawled like a baby. I'm so sad, only five more chapters left.
fall3n-ros3s
2009-02-01 . chapter 13
This was def one of my fav chapters. I've always adored the Minako/Yaten pairing, and you made such a great subplot for them! The scene where Yaten protected Minako from Hectate and when he was "dying" was so touching. Bravo.
fall3n-ros3s
2009-02-01 . chapter 9
Omg this is getting totally intense! You have some pretty darn good plot twists. Wah what's Usagi gonna do now that everyone but her lost their powers??!??!!
fall3n-ros3s
2009-02-01 . chapter 7
Okay, I officially bow down to your awesome writing skills. You made the scientific discussion about time travel and teleportation between Ami and Taiki sound totally believable. It was amazing. =)
fall3n-ros3s
2009-02-01 . chapter 6
Yay Chibi-Usa is back! I can't wait to see the Lights' reactions when they meet Chibi. =D
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