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| YoungBoho 2006-05-09 ch 1,  | abuseokay first of all, i LOVE your writing style, its so unique, normally i think it would be weird for the characters to speak that way but it ended up working really well... very cool. Secondly, that was probably one of the most heartbreaking roger death fics i've read, and being a roger lover, i've read a fair share of roger death stories... loved it!! great job!! |
| Lanhar 2006-04-17 ch 1, | abusewell that made me want to cry... it was so beautiful, from the happy times with the friends, to the holidays and how they remembred Angel... i liked that bit the best i think, the picture on the tombstone and then their thoughts there at the end, knowing it wasnt the way either of them wanted to go, but accepting that life sucks some times... anyway its a great peice, i love it lanna |
| Arqueete 2006-04-16 ch 1, | abuseThe format you chose, though occasionally a little confusing when it wasn't entirely clear who was speaking, proved to be powerful in it's abstractness. An interesting and refreshing take on some ideas and situations so commonly tackled in Rentfic. |
| Jealous Maureen 2006-04-16 ch 1, | abuseUm..this is a very interesting piece. Ok, I'll be simple, I got lost at the very first sentence. It's like...Rei's Poem. Now, I dont know if you watch anime or anything, but i use too. There was there this one show, called Neon Genesis Evangelion, and the whole show was like this. It was hard to follow unless you knew the background infomation. I didn't follow it, and well...yay, just a little bit weird. Good writing though, I like your descriptions |
| Shadows in the City Lights 2006-04-16 ch 1, | abuseWow. WOW. That's all I've got to say, is wow... WOW! Just... Guh. Speechless... Just... Excellent fic. |