I have to read more

I have to read more

I have to read more

:)

It must be hurting Martin to be loving Diana while keeping this secret. More :)

What happened to Martin's dad? Was it sucide? My curiousty is ticking.:)

Awesome I like this story already my favourite part "this is the mission" and kisses her :)

DON'T PUT IT DOWN FOR 'COMPLETE' IF IT'S FUCKING NOT! AWWWW MAN, PLEASE FINISH THIS!

more please!

Is this supposed to be poetry or prose? The spacing has left me confused on that point.

Also, I don't see why this has an M rating. Perhaps it would be better suited to a T rating. There is swearing in the second chapter, but it's very brief and can easily be overlooked.

I'd also like to point out that it has been assumed that Jenny is Diana's best friend and that Martin has his own room.

good story!please write more!

No problem. If you're not that familiar with canon, you can use the Martin Mystery Resource Forum on this site to ask questions. The administrator is EveKnight75. I'm sure the people who actually visit that forum would be willing to help by providing answers and general info about the show. I'd also like to suggest TV. com and YTV. com. YTV is the anglo-Canadian channel which airs Martin Mystery.

Hey sweetblood,

Thanks for the review, I'm fixing it right now...I don't really watch the show that often...I was inpsired to write this by only watching one episode one day so I don't really have all the details of the show in my head memorized...Ya I'm stupid which of course you already know...I'm going to revise it...and probably not make it like poetry if that distracts the reader...I knew there was something wrong with it too...since I didn't get any reviews anyways...

If this fic is supposed to be prose, why is it in poetry format? Honestly, that only makes this harder to read. From what little I can see, this can turn out to be a good fic, but you really should reformat this into prose so that it will be easier on the eyes. BTW, Martin doesn't have a roommate. It's been established on the show. Every time they show us his room, there's only one desk and bed, so it's obviously a single. It would also be impossible for Martin to use the Centre's console as often as he does if he had a roommate who was unaware of the Centre.

KEEP GOIN update very sOOn!