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Fictionpress (Hips Don't Li...
2006-11-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseLovely - nearly original category.
Tatharwen Took
2006-04-21
ch 1,
abuseWow, Whitney! I really like this. Lucy's so sweet, and I love the way Aslan calls her to Narnia... I thought you kept with Aslan's nature well with 'my love' and 'my dove'; don't you just love the way he calls her 'dearheart' in the books? Keep writing! ~Tatharwen Took~
candysweets
2006-04-17
ch 1,
abuseI thought this was vary buetiful and vary touching thank you for wrighting this, in my opention you couldn't have done a better job =)
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