love it!

must resist pervyness... plz review!

Very interesting! Can't wait to see how it turns out!

please please please update!

please update

sounds cool! great job person 'i want to call dude but am not sure of their gender'!

this is a great story keep wirting it if you will I realy enjoy it.

I'm loving this already!It's cute.I always thought of what would hapen if Ren and Takeya got 're ac ute couple.

Not Bad at all I would like to read more very much so if you would send me a e-mail when you right more.

Answer this e-mail please.

This story is really cute!

Update Soon!_

next chapter please

too short! please make them longer!

im new to the DearS series buit i love it already! it reminds me of chobits. its a good story, but you should try to make it longer.

looks good! keep on the good work! _

First reviewer on this fic, yay. But down to business. You have a good original concept, but your chapters need to be alittle longer and you should add more detail into the characters.

For example: "Koharo got up and brushed some dirt off his pants, noticing a beautiful girl his own age in front of him..."

What color hair does this girl have? Her skin tone, her eye color, and her outward aura can paint a picture in a readers mind.

You are doing a good job so far, but try to remember to add more details. The more relevant details, the more positive reviews. That I promise you.