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| Neko-Mimi123 2008-02-11 ch 39,  | abuseI love this story! |
| Neko-Mimi123 2008-01-06 ch 10, | abuseHarper is so BAMF! |
| demon unicron 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abusehi again, i know that i review is a bad way to condact you, but i could not think of another way. anyway, i deleted the Andromeda story, i just did't know how to finish it. i just finished a chapter for another story, hofuly it would be more sussuful, and i was wondering if you could proof read it. you probley won't conidering i havent loged in all summer, but i will serously try to finsh this one. by the way, this story looks good. |
| Katarite 2007-07-15 ch 58, | abuseAs all good things must, this has come to an end, but I am more than excited that it is going on ^_^. In the epilogue, I enjoyed Tyr's POV. You have an excellent grasp of his character and motivations. I cannot wait to see his deviousness in Alt. 2. And, speaking of Alt. 2, you have captured the interplay between Beka and Tyr perfectly. Rommie using another AI's feelings for her as leverage is also great ^_^. |
| ilexx 2007-07-13 ch 58, | abuseAnd it does go on! Very much looking forward to this. |
| ilexx 2007-07-13 ch 57, | abuseI've grown very fond of the story. It is one of those that one would wish to go on and on and on... |
| Xeromem 2007-07-13 ch 58, | abuseYou have piqued my interest already. |
| Xeromem 2007-07-13 ch 57, | abuseVery nice epilogue and it was my pleasure to help out. |
| Troll99 2007-07-13 ch 56, | abuse"Return the salute, you moron." Hillarious! This sentence made my day. It's really amazing how you managed Rommie's entrance. If I wouldn't like her until now, I'd have to start liking her after this scene. |
| Katarite 2007-07-12 ch 56, | abuseWonderful set-up for the next part ^_^. It's nice to learn a little bit more about Trance's people and why she is no longer with them, and nice to see everyone worrying about poor Harper. Great job again! |
| Xeromem 2007-07-10 ch 56, | abuseExcellent chapter. I loved Rommie's entrance. |
| ilexx 2007-07-10 ch 56, | abuseI very much liked the lessons in history - and manners - Tyr had in store for Dylan. |
| MaryRose 2007-07-06 ch 55, | abuseGood to see this is still going strong. |
| Troll99 2007-07-05 ch 55, | abuseThe Spirit makes its entrance... or... Harper meets his ultimate horror, without even knowing it. Perfect chapter with very captivating and very detailed battle scenes descriptions. My congratulations to both of you. |
| Katarite 2007-07-01 ch 55, | abuseAnd so the SOtA makes his appearence to yet another Andromeda crew member. Poor Harper, he is definately going to have some explaining to do. Perhaps they can blame it on his head injury... This was an intriguing chapter and I cannot wait for more ^_^. |