I loved both the ficlet and poem. And I'm so so glad you decided to use the book "Moorchild".

Wow.these were pretty good! I mean,they could be better,but still,this is the only Moorchild fanfic I've been able to find on the whole Internet, so you deserve props just for thinking of it at all! You wrote this a long time ago,so I doubt you plan to update,but if you ever do,I would love to read it!

The Moorchild has been one of my very favorite books since I read it when I was 10. (I think it's kind of a funny coincidence that you published this fic the same day I finished reading the book the first time — I know,like anyone cares,but I think it's cool!)

Great alternate ending! Not many people have read this book, and so there are like no fics about it. I ought to write a fic about it someday soon...

OMG this is even better than the what-if! Yay!

This is really hard to think about. At first I thought that Saaski, after travelling with Tam, came back and married Herewic. But then I remembered that if Saaski hadn't been changed, she wouldn't have been chased out. It's good though. I like it.

AH! I'm so happy to have found someone else who has read Moorchild. It's a great story! This is cool. Interesting twist you added.

I lurve the poem! The what-if one isn't as good, but the poem is awesome! The Moorchild being one of my favorite books, I've been intending to write a fic on it, maybe for Old Bess or somebody. It's great that somebody actually has!

Yes, this is very good. I liked both. I loved "The Moorchild", I've been wondering if anyone else out there has read it...

I've always been curious about Tam, really...

Well done, I'm sorry to see that you have only posted these two articles. I haven't read the book for a long time. I am beginning to forget the magic of the moor.

The Moorchild is like the best book of all time! My one copy is ripped and stained and who knows what else from my reading it all the time. And it seems to get better every time. I usually write only pokemon fics, but I'll have to consider putting my stuff up here...GREAT FIC!-pkc

Good work! I love that book! :)

Yesss! I loved The Moorchild! It's one of my favorite books. I am so glad someone wrote a story about it; especially a what-if story. I'd always wondered what-if she hadn't been caught... but I never imagined she'd be captured again. Very interesting.