O... Very good. I like how you meshed the two together. Are you planning on doing any more, or was it just a one shot? It could work either way.

Sweet, this looks interesting. Care to update anytime soon?

Love to see where you're going with this. I'm hooked!

Interesting idea. The story seems to be off to an good start, and I'm enjoying it so far. I'm looking forward to reading more!