Reviews for His Former Boyfriend

Reviews For: His Former Boyfriend - Reviews: Page 1 of 8

Hotaru Sada 2007-10-15 ch 1,	abusethis seems like a good story
Isika666 2007-05-21 ch 20,	abuseThis story is amazing! I read it in 2 days! I could not stop! I love it! It's my favorite gravi fanfic! I love Hiro and Tatsuha together! And even though Hiroshi ended up with K it was so cute! You did a wodnerful job! You should really think about writing a one shot for Hiro and K. I want to see where their relationship goes. You did a Great job!
The-Anibee 2007-05-07 ch 20,	abuseAMAZING as always. What a spectacular ending. Suspense and romance all in one! I'm so glad K and Hiro are together. Kiro to the end! Sweet! Well done on the story. I absolutely loved it. :)
autotoxicity 2007-05-06 ch 20,	abuseK's big, blond, burly body is delicious. Now we see the end of a saga and it has been intense. The pill and the vodka and the katana. I feel sorry for K, yanno. He's been suffering from unrequited love all this time. If you're going to do a sequel or an epilogue, I will do a happy dance. :) I also feel sorry for Ryuichi but at least he's assured of Tatsuha's loyalty. All in all, I'm happy you saw this story to the end. It's great, well-written, original and well thought out. I'll be waiting for your next story. :D
tepee712 2007-05-06 ch 18, anon.	abuseNo, I understand where you are coming from, but I guess I still disagree. I don't believe this story's ending qualified as a tragedy. Maybe because I see tragedy as more than just the lost of old love and starting new which seems more like a transition, considering how your story ended. Also I did like the fact that he ended with K, I just didn't think the last chapter qualified as a good last chapter for it. If anything the only tragedy is that you choose to end it right then. But different readers, different strokes.
Siraelka 2007-05-03 ch 20,	abuseBeautiful one-shot. Thank you. I like stories where everything ends up the way I want :-D No, seriously, I have had some idea about K´s feelings for some time, from that time Ryuichi gave him the "present" to be exact, but sometimes I doubted my intuition as the story progressed. Which is good thing, because it shows that you are great author and are able to keep your readers on their toes. Loved it. S.
LaDiDaanifan 2007-05-02 ch 20,	abuseWow...that was...shocking Well, though I was hoping for Tat and Hiro to end up together-I guess Ive always known it had to end up a different way. K, is a pretty cool guy, just pefect for Hiro I loved this story; Have fun with the next one you write!
kiki 2007-05-02 ch 20, anon.	abusethank god. i have to say this story actually turned me onto the k hiro pairing, even before this chpt. i'm just glad ryu and tat stayed together. i have to say, every chpt left me feeling wow, almost like i was experiencing the emotional roller coaster with the characters. i'm gonna miss this story, but i'm so glad its over, i don't think i could have taken anymore.
Sakuma Sonnet 2007-05-02 ch 20,	abusethank you actually ^^ I had never thought about tats and hiro until you, and I read it all (andIn the end i DID get what I liked most xD) according to the rest of the story, I think it lacked a little polishing between k and hiro, but the rest was good enough ^^ I hope to read you again soon, take care ^^
Tepee712 2007-05-02 ch 19,	abuseAs I read my own review for Chapter 20 I've realized it may be harsher than I intended. I just wanted to point out, that this was the oldest story I have followed from the chapter posted until the last. I thought you character development and the drama was well built. its just the only scene where i saw maybe some hiroxK was him saving his daughter and even then ever action that K did could have easily been interpreted as a concerned manager and good friend. Not as someone in love which is while I did like the idea of K and Hiro ending together, I wish it had developed gradually, instead of the space time that it took from hiro sleeping with tatsuhaone night, till 24 hours later, both of them over eachother and ready to work their relationships or do a new relationship. Then there was the tape- which i had understood Ryuichi had manipulated the tape. But did Hiro know it was fabricated (maybe i need to reread it) Anyway, i didn't want you to think i was entirely thrown off the story, i was just a bit put out, for the reasons I explained in both reviews. Anyway will look out for your other stories. ciao!
Tepee712 2007-05-02 ch 20,	abuseIt was a very good story, I loved every single chapter except for the 'very out of place' last one. I liked the idea of Hiro ending with K but I didn't buy the way you choose to have the pairing suddenly engage on the last chapter. Maybe if their relationship had grown more obviously, as in there were more hints of K's feelings about Hiro, but there weren't many, if any. I feel as if I read a book of two characters being in love/lust enough to risk their most important relationships, and then both of them suddenly going 'eh' and moving on. Its almost like why did they even bother ruining two marriages and almost a three year old relationship? A fling that Hiro could have easily flung with K from the start? Sheesh Plus there were some stuff that you brought in the story that was left unresolved. I could have easily assumed that you were just a new writer learning the ropes. But I read your other chapters and the whole building up until the last chapter was well done. It just almost seems to me, that you got tired of writing the story and just decided to post an ending to get it done with. But hey, you are the author, I'll just take whatever ending you give, appreciate it for what it was, and move on. But lesson learned, next time I'll read your whole story and skip the last chapter.
Zilched 2007-05-02 ch 20,	abuseYay! ^-^ You finally finished it! I am quite pleased with how you ended it! Throughout the whole thing, I figured K had something for Hiro. It was obvious, and I LOVED it! :D At first I thought Tatsuha would actually end up with Hiro, but I'm actually glad he stayed with Ryu. Because even though Ryu was a bad man, he still...wasn't. xD You had the characters nearly in perfect character, and I loved it! Thanks for having such a creative mind and entertaining me with this great piece of work for the past year! :D ~Zilched
shinycry 2007-05-02 ch 20,	abuse...it's over? NO! sniff i loved the ending and how Hiro is with K and Tatsuha and Ryuichi are still together. Tatsuha got his leaf back and Ryuichi's safely back home! gosh, i don't know what to say? i followed this story ever since chapter 9, i think, and it's sad that this great story has come to an end. any chance for a sequel? afterall, the whole divorce issues that both K and Hiro are going through and the fact that they both have a kid. that would be interesting. anyway, i truly love this story and thank you for allowing us, the readers, to read and enjoy it.
LuV2Writ3 2007-05-02 ch 20,	abuseBeautiful. Absolutely, breath-takingly beautiful. Your style of writing makes me envious of how much emotions and characterization you can put in a sentence. I loved all aspects of this story, and how many unexpected twists and turns it took. It was a very interesting ride that kept me intrigued from beginning to end. The ending makes my inner-fangirl happy-squee, as the Ryuichi/Tatsuha pairing is the one I was routing for, even though the Hiro/Tatsuha one you presented has made me a fan for that pairing as well. I love your Ryuichi. So wonderfully manipulative. Thank you for sharing this awesome story with us. I hope we can expect more from you soon! ^_^ Hugs, LuV
brokenspirit 2007-05-01 ch 19, anon.	abusewow...this story has kept me on edge since the beginning. I never know what's going to happen next. Excellent story! Keep up the good work, this chapter had me in tears lol.

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