That was good; really it was. It was probably thoughts like THAT that made him decide to leave the Organization in the first place. Again, really good!!

Kouji-wolf

This short one-shot is pretty good. Despite the mistakes I spotted in here, the Axel and Roxas friendship you got going here is nice. I won't complain whether the characters were IC or OOC because I believe you did just fine. You're a good writer but there is always room for improvement. ^_^ good job!

Yanno i really wonder sometimes if Nobodies really CAN or CAN'T eat. They can because Roxas eats the sea-salt icecream, but they cant because u never see any of the other ones eating. hell you never see the other ones ANYWAY...

Ramble-session is now over.

I thought this was, for a lack of a better word...well i cant say GOOD, it's just not GOOD enough of a word, and EXTRAVAGANT isnt my style, so for now i think i may have to settle and call it brilliant. I can understand why it was short; leaveing people's minds to wander. Short sweet and to the point fit the story really well.

btw, love your art. XD

-Ethe

Awesome characterization, although I would have written Axel a bit differently, and I love your style. So many metaphors over which I can squee!

Good job. It really captures how I think the Nobodies must feel.

I thought this was kinda cute. It's sweet, but also has that slightest touch of darkness. I like it.

~Koichi

I really enjoyed this ficlet. The whole idea of what it's like to feel nothing is just...wooh, and the relationship between Axel and Roxas is...yea. XD I'm not very articulate. XD Awesome job! ^_^