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| adara13 2008-10-04 ch 6,  | abuseWow, this story is awesome! It's such a different take on story done a million times. I really like it. |
| kat 2008-09-24 ch 6, anon. | abusethis is really good- such a good idea please continue it or is it abandoned? |
| one who reads 2008-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI am amazed and jelaous by the talent you have. To write the way you do. The only problem I have to tell you(because no good message would be complete with out telling you away to improve) is the begining. Not the prologue, the part were it starts to take off. When Ron, and Harry, and Hermoine are talking wouldn't they have a little bit more of a friendship before the automatically decide to change the world. I would also like to praise the beginings of your chapter, how it starts off with someone telling something. My favorites were... wow i don' have any. I liked them all to much. I would go back just to read them over again. -from one who reads P.S. I would like to thank you for making this story. If i could pick a favoritestory of any kind this would be in my top five. And its hard to get in my top five. |
| Cwejr 2008-09-17 ch 6, | abuseReally a shame that this story has been abandoned. It started out so good (and definitely different). I hope you eventually pick it up again and finish it. It is too good to just drop. |
| BLG 2008-09-13 ch 6, | abuseI hope this will be continued. I love how there are words of wisdom everywhere - and the excerpts of future opinion at the beginning of each chapter. |
| aymanimermaid 2008-09-01 ch 6, | abuseI love this story! |
| Blue eyed vampwolf 2008-08-29 ch 6, | abuseI have one word for you... ' WOW '. |
| twilight Eads 2008-08-25 ch 6, | abuse(speechless with awe) wow, this story is amazig, please continue. Good Luck! |
| La.Regina.Di.Morte 2008-08-25 ch 6, | abusePlease :Falls on her knees: I humbly beg thee, O noble Author, wilt thou listen to my humble request, wilt thou contioue thee story with thou writing skills that surpass my imagination? I wilt do anything for thou to contioue this story Please, Most noble Author, Your Highness, thou brings insperation to the insperationless, thou brings hope to the hopeless, thou brings humor to the humorless. I beg thee, O most noble one, to contioue this story, or arth thou the Evil that treatens , with its boredom and its imaginationlessness. Noble Author hear my plea Or is it the despair you see A writers block so large and thick The boredom will make me sick! I cry, I cry, I sit in despair Life without reading isn't FAIR! To merlin and God I pray or is this the price I pay? |
| Ellyanah 2008-08-16 ch 6, | abuseWow. I think that pretty much sums it up. I really admire how you are unfolding the story. I hope you update soon. |
| Autumn's Solitude 2008-08-08 ch 2, | abuseOh my GOD! This is a cool one! I just stumble upon it now but i don't think i'll let go of this just yet. I'm off for the next chapter. It's original. I like it! ~Sols~ |
| bluefynx 2008-07-28 ch 6, | abuseI love this story. I can't wait to find out what they're going to scheme up next. |
| freddyburn 2008-07-18 ch 6, | abuselove this story... PLEASE update soon |
| Joanna 2008-07-17 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease, please, PLEASE finish translating. Cause my german beond sucks and I can't figure out even half of it in German and I really really REALLY wanna know how it ends.especially since I know its finished. Could you find someone to finish translating, maybe? Bitte schone! |
| freddyburn 2008-07-16 ch 3, | abuseloving this story so far... |