this is so kooled xD yay hinata got sasuke ^^ no offense but i do feel kinda bad for sakura though in chap 8

lol they toture him with kisses? That's cute =)

the goodbye ending was beautiful and short...doesn't matter cause I like it alot and whoever he was...I'm guessing it's open to the reader, right.

That was sweet, yep that sounds like Naruto.

that was beautiful!! I love your sashina stories or drabbles (whatever this is)...you seem to capture them perfectly..

As short as it was, I think this drabble was my favorite because the message it conveyed seemed a little more powerful.

Only point for improvement:
"So when he came into her life and offered her way out of the life she was in.."
It would flow a little better if 'her way' was 'her a way' and one of the 'life' words was replaced with something else holding similar meaning.

Good stuff :)

This chapter I felt was lacking compared to the others, mostly because Hinata's stutter appeared noticably overdone and interfered with both flow and mood. It's simple enough to fix this though, just by toning it down a little.

Admittedly, I'm not so good at reviewing small drabbles in comparrison to larger stories. However, I can say that this drabble did catch my eye and left a lot open to interpretation and imagination, as a drabble should.

Elegantly written. ^^

How about one where you look at what could have happened if she became the clan's leader.

omg these are really good ^^
surprised there aren't more reviews.

Excellent drabbles! Write more soon, please?
-adds to Story Alert and Favorites-

That was amazing! Like a whole story in a tiny drabble. It's filled with emotion left and right and leaves the perfect amount to the imagination. Good job on this one!