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| Sanqhian 2006-06-13 ch 9,  | abuseGood to see them still together. And I love that Eva threatened to off Lara and hide her body. That line was priceless! Well done. I can't wait for more. Sanqhian |
| Sanqhian 2006-06-13 ch 8, | abuseBye bye Lara. Have a nice trip. Glad someone else saw the evil in her. How dare she try killing Speed. Good chapter. I take it you like Darren Hayes... Sanqhian |
| bookwrangler 2006-06-06 ch 9, | abuseWow. Very good. Very powerful. Very real. Thanks for keeping Speed alive. |
| Swift tales 2006-06-06 ch 9, | abuseStunning, I really liked it that Eva decided to confront Lara |
| Sanqhian 2006-06-02 ch 7, | abuseGood chapter. I'm happy that Abbey is still alive. And it's great how you worked in Speed's guilt. The emotions and situations are all very life-like. Sanqhian |
| Swift tales 2006-05-29 ch 8, | abuseIs this the end of Lara? Or will it get worse before it gets better? ... then again I can't really imagine it getting worse anyway, I hope you update soon :D |
| speedmonkey 2006-05-28 ch 8, | abuseWell I'm finally glad the cops took Lara away. How could anyone want to kill Speed? I mean that should be illegal. lol. Update soon please. |
| Sanqhian 2006-05-19 ch 6, | abuseOh, wow, that's not what I expected. Poor Eva. At least Speed tried. Good thing someone was watching the little kid play in the ocean. Sanqhian |
| Sanqhian 2006-05-18 ch 5, | abuseSpeed, Danny, and Darren Hayes; three of my favorite men. I loved this chapter. It's passionate. She shouldn't regret it though. That'll make Speed feel bad. Of course, he shouldn't have gone along with her advances, seeing as she was drunk. Sanqhian |
| forensic-chick 2006-05-15 ch 7, | abuseOh my God!! You had me seriously freaked there!! I was almost crying! I thought Abbey had died!! This story is excellent.. keep up the great work. I enjoy reading it and hope to see many more sequels. :D |
| Swift tales 2006-05-14 ch 7, | abuseYay! she's not dead! what a relief, I was really worried for a second I'm glad that all of this is bringing Eva and Speed closer, they deserve to be together ^^ Now if you can get Ryan a girlfriend I'll be eternally grateful ^^ or get Eric and Ryan together ^^ lol *just joking, never mind me* Hope you update soon Greets Swift tales |
| Swift tales 2006-05-14 ch 6, | abuseNO! OH MY GOD! THIS IS HORRIBLE! YOU EVIL EVIL EVIL WRITER! HOW COULD YOU? update! PS: I love your story |
| speedmonkey 2006-05-13 ch 6, | abuseAw Poor Abbey. So was such a cutie. Please update soon. |
| Swift tales 2006-05-12 ch 5, | abuseyeah, thanks for sending me a private message about this I'd gotten the mail for it but I didn't have a lot of time and decided to review later, then of course I deleted all my watched mails and promptly forgot about it anyway, I loved it! it's beautiful, sensual and perfect. I hope that this will gave them the push they need to talk about everything and finally get together again. They're broken, the both of them, but together they can be fixed I love the way you write them Greets, Swift tales |
| Sanqhian 2006-05-02 ch 4, | abuseI admit, in the beginning, I hated Ryan. But he's grown on me and I hated when he got nailed- no pun intended. You captured the teams' love for one another perfectly. And I'm glad that Horatio isn't too upset with Delko. Good job. Sanqhian |