 pocksuppet 2006-04-18 . chapter 9Just curious, are you a new watcher of Degrassi? I'm not only asking this because your fic obviously takes place in Season 2, but because you clearly have no grasp on the characters' personalities. Plus, Paige and the others would NEVER treat the Dean situation so lightly.
Secondly, your character is a Mary Sue. Have you not noticed that half of the stories here are about a girl from the U.S. transferring to Degrassi and immediately capturing the attention of one of the guys? It's nauseating.
Finally, you obviously dislike Paige. That's fine and dandy, except that you should really try to disregard your hatred for certain characters when writing fanfiction. Otherwise, you'll be too biased to characterize them properly. |