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Reviews for: Through the Crosshairs
Vanessa S. Quest
2008-05-09 . chapter 1
I missed reading your wonderful FAKE fanfics, it really is truly amazing how someone can write characters they didn't create so well, as if they had in fact penned them. I hope you continue to write FAKE stories in the future, the more fluffy hurt-comfort angst, the better.
endiahna
2007-05-12 . chapter 1
I liked a whole lot!
Devil666sc
2006-04-24 . chapter 1
Another great FAKE fan fic from my favorite author. Nicely writen and intresting subject.
Tohru-tan
2006-04-21 . chapter 1
This is really an excellent story. I think it's written quite well and the initial question your friend had proposed resulted in a very well-written, unique story. I'm surprised it doesn't have more reviews! I mean, it's only been a few days, but still...

I really like how you write. You add emphasis where you need it, you have a strong hand on the English language (thus making your writing really good) and the way you portray things is amazing. I'm going to check out some of your other works sometime! =)
soubi202
2006-04-19 . chapter 1
aw, i really liked it! you need to have an epilouge (however you spell that)
EroKappa
2006-04-17 . chapter 1
WOW. Another great story. I love how you portray the characters. You so get them the way the original author does them. You have amazing talent. This is one of those wonderful stories that touches the heart. Please keep up the good work!!
Misslady/Erokappa
BlueSimplicity
2006-04-17 . chapter 1
You know how I feel about this story - I've told you already. But I just had to come here and say, once more, what a brilliant fic this turned out to be. As you stated in your intro, it started from one simple sentence and it became this wonderful story, full of so much life, emotion and history. You provided wonderful insight into both Dee and Ryo's character, and gave us an even greater sense of their bond together. You never cease to amaze me as not only a FAKE writer, but as a storyteller in general. You've got a way with words that takes my breath away. GREAT JOB!! And as always, I can't wait to see where you take us next.
ColeridgeFan
2006-04-17 . chapter 1
Ooh, that was good, as always. You are one of the best writers on here. ;)
sabacat
2006-04-17 . chapter 1
I love the peep into their down-time together...the simple caring, sharing, and love. Wonderful!
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