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Rinne 2007-11-20 ch 14,	abuseI started reading this ages ago, and then lost the tab that had it. Awesome, awesome story.
Kiki Cabou 2007-07-18 ch 14,	abuseAw! Great ending. :) Very interesting and suspenseful tale. I liked all of the added characters, particularly Stan the Dinner Moocher and the surfer/save the river/accidentally hire terrorists couple. The scene between Don and Alan and the dudes with guns was terrifying and real and the aftermath was handled very appropriately. Nobody totally lost their minds, but everyone had reasonable reactions to what happened. Megan and David and Colby were all painted nicely and did their part well. And I really liked the last line. Nice job!
annie 2006-05-21 ch 14, anon.	abuseWow, what a great story! I consumed it all in one sitting, and enjoyed every second of reading. Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent with us.
Kathleen 2006-05-20 ch 14, anon.	abuseNice job! Not the ending I expected, lol. Very nicely tied up. I could see Don getting upset over his father's heroic's. Okay, when's the next one! ;)
thebondgirl 2006-05-19 ch 14,	abusehey there! yeah, sorry i didn't review for the other chapters - i've been meaning to start in on that a while ago, but things got in the way, and by the time i had some time to myself, the fic was done, so here it is, for all 14 chapters: this was an amazing composition of detailed information/facts, and mathematical concepts written in such a fashion that i felt as though charlie himself were explaining things to me! VERY impressive work, very well written and fun to read; did NOT receive half the amount of reviews and feedback that it deserved:) keep up the terrific work in future fics!:):):)
Sarai 2006-05-18 ch 14,	abuseI loved this story, it was excelent, especially loved the medafore.
Vickie, JAX 2006-05-18 ch 14,	abuseIt's a fitting ending for the story, just the same type of conversation, scuffling between the brothers, etc., that we see on the show. Very nice.
JennK528 2006-05-18 ch 14,	abuseBravo! Very well done, as always! I'm sorry it came to an end, too! I hope you write many more... Love how you captured the characters' voices all so well - I could always hear them in my head as I was reading. Good job.
Izhilzha 2006-05-18 ch 14,	abuseThe pretty bow on top of the well-wrapped present. The two of them had risked their lives for each other, and he supposed that that forged a bond that you had to be part of to understand. And he hoped he never found out what that was like firsthand. That's neat; for a moment I thought Charlie was jealous of that, and then he ducks back into the part of him that is very grateful to have escaped such an experience himself. And that last metaphor--Charlie's right, it is a little weak (you and your touches of realism, just like the show does), but it gets its point across, and it's a neat image, the three Eppes men as flashes of brilliant greenish light in the darkness of the world around them, shining more brightly the more things come against them. applauds Well done. Now I can go recc this to my friends who refuse to read WIPs. LOL.
Queen of Cliffies 2006-05-18 ch 14,	abuseawesome chapter. i love how you ended it. Please tell me there will be more to this story! It cant be over yet!
Harm Marie 2006-05-18 ch 14,	abuseGood ending.
Izhilzha 2006-05-18 ch 13,	abuseOh, well done. I knew Don wasn't the body, but it's a nice nod to the fear you put us in at the end of the last chapter. :-) I love, love, love seeing the aftermath of this incident from Alan's point of view. It's not something he's used to (he's not Don), it's not even something he's really seen (he's not Charlie). And: Charlie entered the room, his face pale and mouth set in a grim line. He sat down next to Alan and put a hand over his. "You were amazing, Dad," he said quietly. "That's not what your brother thinks," he scoffed. "He thinks I took too big a risk." "That’s not what I meant." Charlie cleared his throat. "I was watching Don tell his story, you know, next door," and he jerked his thumb towards the mirror. "He was so matter-of-fact about it. I mean, I've seen him give a statement before, and he didn't really treat this any differently. It's part of his job, right? But then you, you're sitting in here and talking the same way that he is. You're so calm, so collected, and meanwhile you're describing how you and Don nearly—" He broke off and dropped his gaze to the tabletop. That moved me deeply; and I am so impressed by your Charlie, here. This is the guy we've seen later this season, who worked through the incident in "Rampage" and came through "Backscatter" with (imho) flying colors...but who is still scared to death by the whole situation, even if he's not advertising it to the world. And I thought the touch of Charlie not having gotten any details till he sees Alan and wounded-Don come into the office was very realistic. Speaking of which, I feel sorry for Don's upper left arm. :-) With the graze in "Uncertainty Principle" and this through-and-through, there's gonna be some serious scarring. I'm assuming there's a chapter or two of wrap-up left. Yes?
3rdgal 2006-05-18 ch 13,	abuseI love it! Thank you for updating!
Sarai 2006-05-17 ch 13,	abuseI love it! Nice job!
Harm Marie 2006-05-17 ch 13,	abuseWow. You really had me worried there for a minute. I'm glad that at least that ordeal is over with.

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