I liked it.

Does Fujin REALLy talk like that?
It was so...OBNOXIOUS!
xD lol but it was good nonetheless :)

"She was just Quistis: single, solitary Quistis. Who would want a bossy nerd like her anyway? Squall sure hadn’t." Holy crap. How many times in my life have I felt like that? That's probably why I love Quistis so much...it's easy to relate to her. *sigh* But I'm a lot like Rinoa at times, too, so...well. Whatever. And now I sound like Squall. SO ANYWAY...I'm totally all squishy inside from how GORGEOUS this was. I didn't expect it to be so beautiful. I was also a little iffy on the yuri idea, because...well...I haven't read a decent yuri until now. Honest. :)

Great, GREAT job. Love how Irvine's not an idiot. "“All I see is Fujin.”

“Yeah,” Zell said in agreement with Selphie. Irvine said nothing, just looked at Quistis and winked as he got it."

Wondrous. I love when people portray Irvine as intelligent...be it for...you know, like...relationship things. Sure, he might be lacking in the brain department when it comes to book smarts, but he does know a thing or two here and there. ^^ Great work, again.

Nicely written story, but just one beef. Fujin can speak normally when she wants to. She makes a huge speech right before the group's last battle with Seifer.

Good story but I think the suddent twist of events was a bit unbelievable.

aw... it was so SWET... i think i love it... to my favorites you go!

Sweet! Good story, though i felt the story was rushed with the development of interest towards Quistis' "savior". Try expanding it, by exploring into their minds. Anyways, nice try, i encourage you to write more of this coupling! There's not enough out there of em =]

Aw cute i loved it.

Howdy! I love this! I'm not a huge yuri fan, but I found it very sweet. Good job!