...So what did the brand look like? (not that I'm curious...)

I really like your writing style, can't wait to keep reading ^__^

Anzu DIED. ^_^ It makes me kinda happy, hehehe.

You should read 'Aurora.' It's on my favorite. It's the best Bakura/Malik out there.

I think you could have definitely slowed down the storytelling by a lot. I try to follow this piece of advice: Show don't Tell. I don't want to be mean, but you can revise this fic a lot, and make it sound so much better. You can add more emotions, you can add more angst, you can add more detail...

Anyways,I liked the plot. It was a good idea. I mean, you don't normally see Malik as the one beaten down, and I think you've done a fine job showing him as such. And the pairing? Kawaii! Cute! I loved it!

quite good. Most of the chapters are just the right length for me. not too short but not too long. the only bad things i can point out is the grammar sometimes, and you didn't really went into detail about how Marik suddenly turned from nice to crazy. Other than the fact that isis died, but what does that have to do with Malik? I think all bad guys should at least have a reason for acting the way they do. and i was never really sure if this was an AU or if the Yami/hikari thing was still there. I thought it might be AU cus you said malik and marik were bros, but when you insinuated that Bakura use to hurt ryou i wasn't sure. also a little oocness, but that can be expected for most fics involving bakura or marik in romantic situations to work right =)

hey thats not fair! Marik get Malik but Bakura doesnt!?
That isn't justified at all.:(
AWsome story though XD Ur very talented and i hope to read more bak/mal fics from u soon!

That was so sweet cry >.

*sigh* No! It can't be over! Gah. Very good story, very good for a first time yaoi ^_^ I'm writing my own first yaoi, it's over half way done so hopefully I can finish mine soon. Anway, I look forward to any future writing you may do, I liked the way this story ended, you wrapped it up nicely. =) So good luck in life and merry Christmas! ^.~

cool story update soon

Yoru: Oy. Continue.

Kuronue: Sorry. It's late and she's exhausted.

Yoru: I like this story. PLEASE (glares at Kuronue) continue it. (Smiles at author) You do such a fabulous job with Kura and Malik. That's my favorite YGO pairing! Keep up the good work.

Coolie, loved the chapter! Very good, i can't wait for chapter 11! have fun in Cali! Anywho, please update soon! Does bakura get hurt? i kinda hope he does! update soon! love ya!

Well I just read like the last four chapters XD Excellent work as always. T_T Marik is so evil in this story, I hope everything works out for Malik and Bakura! Can't wait for more, have fun in California! ^_~

Like it... no, wait. I actually LOVE IT! This is so great! You just HAVE to write more! Don't leave me hangin' like that! What's Bakura got planned? Will Malik start to see it wasn't his fault? Somebody KILL Marik! Please!
I need Updates!

Bugger, that was short. Like the little scene with Bakura and Malik last chap though. (hugs you) Its so kawaii! Keep it up!

PS: I'll be having lots of updates very very soon.

o.o! A cliff hanger thingy! Anyway that was really sweet of Bakura ^_^ great job!

lol, you deserve to have reviewers!! This story rocks my socks off! ^_~