Thank you. Beautiful, as always.

Adding this to... Guess what? Yeah,that´s right :Favorites! LOL

Wow! This story is incredible!

I can’t believe what you managed to pack into two and a half seconds!
There are so many parts in this story I’d like to point out, but then I would repeat most of the story here.
I really love the way you described Elliot’s memories. You’re juggling with the information, giving hints and answering the resulting questions in the next memory! The way you suggest facts without letting them lead you away from the plot is amazing!

I was laughing out loud when Elliot told Kathy that he’d love her even if she looked like Jabba the Hut and was almost crying the next second, when I was back on the street with him, thinking about his close death and that he was not afraid.
The end was the icing on the cake, leading to the conclusion that he is now back together with Kathy.

This is just incredible! More, please!

This was all very good, but the ending was kind of confusing.

Beautifully, beautifully done. I loved the squad's initial reaction to Olivia. Heck, I loved the hole thing. Well done.

Well my dear this was really good. But of course I knew it would be. I'm sorry I didn't know about this before now. I have really missed out on a great piece. I love the one shots the best and this one really was good. You really captured the characters and even if I hadn't watched the episode you did a great job of leading into your story. The flashback was the best, but my favorite part was the "wild, hot, monkey sex." I am so ready to read more. And you know what I mean. Thanks for sharing.

Wow. That was really beautiful. I mean, even as an E/O fan, I enjoyed reading this ^_^. Wonderful writing. Very emotional.

This was beautifully written. Thanks for sharing it.

I'm an OE shipper, but I loved this story. How beautiful the way he went to Kathy at the end. Great job. Wonderful.

read this earlier, but didn't get a chance to review before now...this was great...

It will be a while before we get this episode in the UK, so some of this was a bit hard to picture. What wasn't hard to see though was the relationship Elliot has with his family, that you painted beautifully.
As always a wonderful job.
Tracy

Well...let me just start off by saying HOLY **! Ok, whew, now that I've gotten that out of the way...

That was, without a doubt, the most fantastic post-Fault story that I've ever seen. I am still in awe of how wonderful it was. As a die-hard advocate for Elliot and Olivia NOT getting together, the best part in my opinion was the scenes with Kathy, especially at the end. Given how the season is playing out so far, I actually have no trouble imagining that happening.

So, once again, great GREAT story!

Probably the saddest post-"Fault" I've read.

I would just like to take this little space online to say that this was such a great one-shot fic. I don't really watch SVU or any of the Law and Order shows...Okay so maybe I watch too many of the re-runs because come one they are on on every single channel on television right now.

Acutally now that I think of the Law and Order show's should have their own television channel...okay so I just got completely sidetracked.

Back to my main point. Yes, I watch the show but mostly the re-runs on USA. I don't even know where it was that I got the idea of watching the show the past couple of days when it actually aired. What I didn't expect was the episode that aired a couple of days ago, Fault. Can you imagine my surprise when I watch and you finally, well not really finally but more of it, get to see the feelings and emotions that the Elliot and Olivia characters have for each other.

No, the writters did an amazing job not making them say it but they did an amazing job writing what they knew would be perfect for the audiece to read between the lines. It was just so emotionally heart wrentching to watch Elliot standing infront of that damn Gitano and the utter peace that you could see in his face. The way he looked at Olivia and the emotions the look between the two gave us, the viewing audience.

What you wrote and I just read seemed like it came right out of the show. The one was so perfectly set. I actually felt my heart constrict as he closed his eyes and the rest of the Hail Mary came and went. The flashing of memories that put into prespectinve the difficult choice's he has had to make in his life. The love his has for his childrenm, that love that he probably once had for his wife but has changed into a different kind since the seperation.

I believed every word of it. You made it so real so excrutiatingly beautiful. I just can't stop re-reading it. Thank you for this and I hope that you write more of these in the future.

Oh and by the way great story. :D

If you haven't guessed I somehow have become roped into the whole Elliot and Olivia coupling. I don't even really know how it happened but it did, damn those re-runs.

very well written. but as an OE shipper I cringed my way trhough it.