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| Nebula 2008-07-26 ch 13,  | abuseIm so glad that you updated! i just figured that you gave up on this story, well i hope that you dont wait so long to update again! |
| HiddenRebel 2008-06-24 ch 12, anon. | abuseI really hope you update this story soon. It is very good and enrapturing. |
| Dontia 2008-05-25 ch 12, anon. | abuseI love this story. Are we going to see more of it? |
| Nebula 2008-04-03 ch 12, | abuseonce again i love it! i hope you continue with this story, though i see that you havent updated in awhile...dont give up on it! its great! |
| Nebula 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abusewell im new to your story and im a huge Tess fan, i like what i've read so far |
| ferocious mope 2008-02-01 ch 12, | abusehmm. isn't there home planet called antar, not avatar? maybe i'm wrong lol love this. though i'm not a big fan of max/tess, or really just max. i do however like the siblingness between michael/tess in future chapters. isabel and michael are so cute! update soon. |
| Mony19 2008-01-29 ch 12, | abuseInteresting chapter At first I was a little confused about Michael's position and why he would be in line for the throne. However, I think I am getting it now. If Tess is like Ava, they do have a better chance of finding her since she likes to retrace her steps and if Michael and the others are starting to remember it will make it easier for them to find her. ud soon |
| Slowly-Burnt-Marshmallow-30... 2008-01-28 ch 12, | abusei really loved the way you slowly indicated it in this chapter and i can't wait till they find tess because if it's anything like the past rath will be the protective big brother. oh and max well i hope he still loves her. can't wait to see michael and isabel controlling a kid that's probably their age or even older, that's realy funny. update soon plz. |
| Kelly-Starfly 2007-12-26 ch 11, | abuseWow, this chapter was great... I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what is going to happen next. Please post more soon... I'm looking forward to reading more of Tess & Alex and of course Max, Michael Isabel and the rest... |
| Mony19 2007-12-26 ch 11, | abuseNow they are getting somewhere. Can't wait to see what they have to say when they find out Nicholas is Michael and Tess's brother. They need to find out more information. ud soon |
| Slowly-Burnt-Marshmallow-30... 2007-11-14 ch 10, | abusethis chapter was well worht the wait but i was a little confused at the end! update soon |
| Running-Wild22 2007-11-13 ch 10, | abuseSneaky, Sneaky, Sneaky but I like it! Hurry Back. |
| Trude 2007-10-04 ch 9, anon. | abusewow, interesting story! and I can so picture the scene in the graveyard ... how could you end the chapter here? |
| Slowly-Burnt-Marshmallow-30... 2007-10-03 ch 9, | abuseooh, mystery and suspense... execept we already know where he is. Nice chapter though. Can't wait till you update again. |
| Mony19 2007-10-02 ch 9, | abuseGood Job I like how they finally realize that is not the real Alex. When they find Tess eventually they are all going to curse her for the inconsistencies in their memories. For now though, I wonder what they will do next, probably tell Max, Michael and Jim. ud soon |