Cute.

That's really sweet! It was sad as well. Great story!

Wow. It's amazing!

But, this story doesn't really fit your penname ya know...

This is one of the best fanfiction's I've read. Your an amazing author! That was so good. I love reading your stories, keep up the good work!

that was awesome, I love your stories, there just great! since Edmund is my favorite character I love reading stories liket these. Thanks for an awesome story.

Fantastic fic. I am actually writing a fic like this, but it does seem a bit too similar, so I think I'll delete it. Anyway, yours is much better than the one I'm writing. So, thanks for the great read,

FTPF

Hooray for angsty Edmund oneshots. I do love them so.

This was really, really good. I liked it a lot. It sort of reminded me of something I would write. It really was perfect; definitely what Edmund was thinking and going through and whatnot.

*sob* Oh, wow! This was amazing, SugarHighNutcase. Very touching. Poor Edmund. Beautifully written.

And Lucy is talking about some crazy, made-up country, with imaginary things like fauns, and Edmund wants to just laugh at her. But Peter is getting angry with him, and Edmund hates when Peter is mad at him. Because Edmund loves his older brother, but Peter can’t know that. So Edmund yells at him, and it hurts him terribly.

Edmund is standing awkwardly in front of his siblings, waiting for something to happen. He’s nervous and afraid and hurting.

“Hello.”

A hug. Another hug.

“How’re you feeling?”

Hurt.

“I’m a little tired.”

“Get some sleep.”

More hurting. Edmund bows his head, and slowly trudges toward the tent he’d been tended to in earlier.

“And Edmund?”

Turn. Look. Hope is in his eyes.

“Try not to wander off.”

I won’t go anywhere, Peter. I don’t want to hurt anymore.

Edmund’s breath comes back, his vision returns, the bleeding slows, and the pain recedes. Peter is crying. Crying- over Edmund? That can’t be right. But Edmund has no time to think about it. He is pulled into a hug, and Peter cries as he holds onto his baby brother. Edmund feels all his past hurts lessen, although they are not gone completely. Edmund thinks they will never go away completely.

*sniff*

Aw. *sniff sniff* That was so swet. I really like it. I haven't seen the movie or read the book yet(I'm probably buying the DVD tomorrow) so I don't understand some settings, but it was really good. Keep writing! I'm going to keep reading and reviewing.

Aw. That was moving. I loved your whole concept about being hurt. You have totally brought the "hurt" meaning to a different level. =D
Great job.
P.S. Don't we all love Ed? *hugs Ed*

-le sigh-
and once again you pop up and amaze me. I luff you.
You are truly amazing with your words, and I love the theme in this one as well. I always love all your ficcies, and this one is no different! I love the alliteration with 'hurting' I truly do. This was awesome! Totally awesome!

I want more.
now.
I want more now.
-taps foot-
=D=D=D=D PLEASE?!?
-squishes you-

That was very cute! And it made me cry at the same time! I loved the video commentary, it was so funny! (the Potty-Mouth Bucket. HAHAHA)Write more stories soon, BYE!

It's really good and really accurate.

luv, Buffy

Oh, Great story! Poor Edmund atleast he stopped hurting! Update...

Oh, it's so pretty and sweet! You really carried the theme over nicely; instead of just being repeated and dull, it adds meaning and depth and it's luffly. I luffs it. :)