- 'The last thing Remus would want would be for his best mate to murder his boy toy. But god was Draco a prick, and Sirius told him so.'

…again: you don't always find such a great and funnily written sirius. really enjoyed the scenes with him.
and I realise this is quite some time ago you posted this story, but it's not finished, is it? to be honest, I'm not such a fan of remus/draco, but as I enjoyed all the scenes with sirius and having him here being a good friend and close to remus, I was curious how this whole promise-thing would end.

- “Terrible news? That’s no fair. I’ve got terrible news,” said Sirius. “Whomever should go first? Ah well, I suppose you could go first. By the by, Narcissa Malfoy committed suicide last night. Okay, now you go first.”

…hrhr, your sirius is brilliant. just brilliant. did you write more fics with him? need to check your profile for other stories =D

the whole Remus-Lupin-was-an-ice-cube part was brilliant. I think you explained it so well and with just the right words and his relationship to sirius - just yes. remus being this more introverted character who is alone often and needs someone like sirius to just be there and stay, be stubborn and confident and take him as he is… loved that you created all this without all the angst, but with humour instead =D

Chapter 3...Uh...Harry is dead? So the thing in the first chpater about Draco wanting to talk to him..um...you need to get who is dead and who is alive in order and fix the first chapter.

Second Chapter: Good and quite cute with the alley scene. A few spelling mistakes but they look a bit like typos as well so all is well. Few punctuation problems but still good over all. Going on to the third ^^.

Alright, Interesting thus far, though I must say:

It is not Lucious but Lucius.

And I am only on chapter one but plan to review each chapter with any tips.

I can't wait to see how it develops. ^~

next chapter please

very nice story, I love the character developments and relationships.

But I'm getting confused about who is alive and who is dead - in chapter one you say that Dumbledore died. Then in chapter five he's alive. And what is going on with Sirius? Did the whole veil thing just not happen in this story, or has he come back, or... ?

hurrah, do continue. i hope sirius and remus end up together, malfoy is being annoying.

damn gryfinndors...are they just going to lead the slytherines along the entire time? oh well this is a great story hope you continue it soon.

remus is being mean to draco ... sadness ... enjoying the story and really like the title

I had to re-read the begining of the bathroom part three times before I understood it, but lovely chapter.

LOL. Look! Look, Severus, do you see the face? Isn’t it frightening? Doesn’t it make you uncomfortable?”

“It does, rather.”

so cute!

lmao. what the hell? and u guys think remus and snape are weird? okay.

*dies*
I give up. I suck compared to this.