ok i had this whole system worked out that i would review for every other chapter to save time, but this is the last one. so my plan has come to an end.

aww and i thought some of the older organization members were going to try to get Roxas drunk.
oh well hehe. funny thought. this was good.

yeah sorry for not reviewing for chapter 2 but it is late and i got to get to bed. so i am practically speed ready.

but this is so fun to read.

this is so great. funny. i saw you on deviantart and decided to read your story.

i actually read your comment, but anyway both were good.

I love it! keep going! its good! it would be great if it kept going. love it! UPDATE IT!


-Alexa xD

XD how cute! the ending was great. haha. great job on this. you had some spelling errors though; you typed in vein instead of in vain, etc. XP but it was a good story!

I love the ending! If this is the end, which is how you made it sound. It leaves room for an epilogue or even a sequel which could be kinda funny!!

-Aimme-

Abuse Xaldin. Abuse him till he cries! >D I love this story.
Me: *casually stands next to Zexion* I...umm...I like your hair. *blush*
Zexion: Mm.
Me: So are the rumors true? That you're emo?
Zexion: God dammit! I AM NOT EMO!! I am thoughtful, ok?! Can't a guy be quiet and smart and have styled hair without being EMO?!!
Me: *smirks*
Zexion: *stalks off*
Me: Let's see how to get Axel drunk enough to make out with me...*grins*

ZOMG!!
you can't just end it like that! i know you said you never finished it, but...but...but gah it's too good just to end it right there! Please consider finishing it?

katy

ROFL!! This story rocks!! I can't wait till your next installment!! I do hope that you finish it...

-Aimme-

XD i love this. XD totally awesome! can't wait for the next chapter. strip... poker...? XD

I must say, I love this xD Luffly story. I hope to see some more soon =D

Oh boy. I can only imagine what's in store for us next chapter, lol. Nice work. I love this story.

Omg >w

haha hilarious story! very original! ^^

Please update soon!

I'm loving this story! its orginal! i love it! lol luxord loves poker! lol, good job! I loveing it! you should try 2 be brave and yell at Xaldin! I hate him! it took me forever to kill him and I hate the female of the organization... I love Axel, Roxas and Demyx! they are my fave and they are nice in the game! so I love them! Woot! good job! update soon!

-Alexa ^.^