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Youko Rayah
2008-09-05
ch 1,
abusereads
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*snerk*

re-reads
...
*snort*

*contemplates*
Bwahahahahahahaha!

evil.
wolfrun1
2008-08-31
ch 4,
abuseWow, I just started reading this today (saw it yesterday, read today) and I must say that I adore it! Everyone just seems so in character, its blowing my mind. Though Naruto is a little smarter than usual, I guess its because he's also a little older than usual too.
But, wow, I almost can't believe the mighty awesomeness of this story. Its normally so hard to keep everyone so normal when a relationship that has not been outed is presented, but...wow.
Usually in these SasuNaru or NaruSasu stories Sasuke is either some kind of super-gay pervert "I wanna and am so gonna rape you when you're not looking" or an OOC emo kid (both if you can manage it), but here he's his normal butt-headed self (duck-butt-headed that is). He's not open with his feelings around most people, he doesn't HATE Sakura (though doesn't like her either), when Naruto's around he can't keep his cool and can't help but argue. That is Sasuke.
Naruto in uke form is normally all "I'm so adorable please screw me", "everybody wants me but I want you", or "I'm so lonely even though I have a majillion friends, can you pwease show me some love". And Naruto in his seme form is normally...um...popular? (I don't really read NaruSasu) Either popular and closeted or extremely perverted...and closeted.
Although...your story does have me thinking... Is it only possible to make a really good NaruSasuNaru...if the two are forced into a relationship? Because it really does seem that way.
jojo661538
2008-08-19
ch 12,
abuseits okay keep up the good work ^_^
KittyBlue
2008-08-06
ch 12,
abuseaww.. i'm loving this story. i just can't wait to read about naru-chan in suna! i'm sure it will be really exciting (or just fun to naruto and annoying to sasuke). and omg they're going to meet gaara! i wonder how that will go. o.o hehe
update soon! *starts whining like a sad sad kitty* =)
jinsane226
2008-08-04
ch 11,
abusewow! i am loving this story so far! i really hope that you update soon. hopefully gaara and naruto can meet up again soon as well!
Runadaemon
2008-08-03
ch 8,
abuseOh cool!! That was really cool! I want them to met. I didn't even consider that Gaara would be one too. I just thought he'd still become Kagekaze, and I didn't really think that through. This is so cool! *Sparkly eyes*
Bob
2008-07-24
ch 12, anon.
abuseNormally, I don't write reviews, too lazy.
But... There you have it:
GREAT. Please write another chapter. Soon. Can't wait.
Master of the Toys
2008-07-18
ch 11,
abusexD They're goin on a mission! Woohoo!! x3 i can't wait to find out what happens!! And when is their relationship gonna develop??:|
Master of the Toys
2008-07-18
ch 6,
abuseLol, i LOVE this chapter (especially the begining). I sat infront of my computer, just singing the 'egg' song over and over and cracking myself up. Is that a real song? Or did u make it up? neway, this story is already one of my favorites ^^.
Kakashipie.deviantart.com
2008-07-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseOops... sorry, I wrote the srong adress:
http://kakashipie./art/Whoa-easy-there-killer-91740254
Kakashipie.deviantart.com
2008-07-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseOops... sorry, wrote the wrong adress:
http://kakashipie./art/Whoa-easy-there-killer-91740254
Kakashipie.deviantart.com
2008-07-15
ch 7, anon.
abuseHey, just wanna say that I completely love you fanfic, and you're one of the best writers I've seen.
The scene in Sasuke's mind, with Naruto left me stuck with a picture in my head, so I drew my version of it and posted it on DeviantArt, here http://kakashipie./art/Whoa-easy-there-killer-91740254
I really hope you like it, but if you want me to remove it I will.
Thanks for a great story.
Choices of Life
2008-07-08
ch 11,
abusethis story is awesome
i hate what the uchiha's did to little naru-chan and kyuu-chan! >:(
i hope they can help gaa-chan! that kazekage is so obnoxious!
the old man from before really intrigues me
i really like his character... even if he is a bit chaotic XP
i'm wondering who he is right now
please update soon!
this story is awesome!
Strawberry Goods
2008-07-08
ch 12,
abuseI absolutely love this fic! I love the whole genie thing! hmm... I suspect Naruto will be meeting Gaara soon? You have a really great plot goin' on here! Update soon!
.Gabby-chan182.
2008-07-07
ch 11,
abuseOoh^^ Really nice! I can't believe I wasn't getting the updates message thingy x3 I'm soo lost xP

-Gabs
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