|Reviews for Her World's Enigma|
| Miriae 5/1/06 . chapter 4
hahahahah! My friend, I LOVE the profile.. it's just so briliant!
Your writing skills are a lot better than mine.. heck, I couldn't even make complex sentences! Seiji, you're great. Just believe in yourself.
I am taking interest in Zell.. bwuhahahahaha! One of these days I'll surely check him out.. bwuahahahaha!
Selphie's imagination thingie was quite.. scary.. hahahaha!
And the letter.. gee.. you love technical writing don't ya?
| potpot 4/30/06 . chapter 4
Seiji my man!So you still don't have confidence in your writing skills, right?well, you should have!I see a lot of effort there and I'm mighty glad you're improving in such a fast pace!Are you sure you're only a beginner?ahihi... and I could see the usual metamphetamine hydrochloride influence in your writing...well,that sure is Seiji!aside from several cases of wrong use of words and a few grammatical errors there (I'm sorry I can't help to scrutinize your work technically...you know me very well,don't you?),I can't ask for more.
“My pleasure. Can I sleep with you?”
For goodness' sake change 'with'!It sounds really...'green'...get it?and you're actually using swear words in your fic!You're gonna be in so much trouble...ahihi.I dig the letter part...what a good example in applying technical writing skills...I'm looking forward for your next update!
| Miriae 4/29/06 . chapter 3
Hello my dear friend!
Hahahaha! love this chapter. I was imagining Zell and my gosh.. he looked cute! and Fujin ang Rajin.. hmm.. i'm smelling romance... or not? what?
And Squall! You must make him appear!
Friend, I am telling you, your writing style is REALLY improving, trust me! I am really proud of you my friend and I hope you'll update soon!
| fluffy-bon-bon-BAAAH 4/23/06 . chapter 3
Hiya, again! Yay, it is another update! I ish so happy, y'know?
Uhh, I don't have an account here cuz I don't really write stories, so yah. D I just review people who are nice enough to let anonymous people review. D
Anyway, I wuv the fighting bit, and the comments you made. Zelly ish cool. Nyuk. And I also liked the bit with Seifer, Fujin and Rajin. Seifer rocks too. D
Well, I really loved this chappie and I hope you update soon!
MWAH - Me.
| Reikan 4/23/06 . chapter 3
Heheh this story is great, ilike the idea a lot, can't wait to see more _
| Miriae 4/20/06 . chapter 2
This stroy is nice.. and.. realistic -snicker- I mean... getting late and yet you still have time for hotdogs.. hahahahahaha!
I may not know the characters but it's really funny!
"Two out of four alarm clocks are devastated every time you wake Selphie up." -. love this line.. hehehehe..
Well! good luck on this story of yours! Just write to your heart's content!
| fluffy-bon-bon-BAAAH 4/20/06 . chapter 2
Whoa. This story is really interesting. Mind you, I was confused in some parts, but when I read over it again, it made sense. Kudos to your writing style; we need people who write like you, not people who have grammar that would shame my type-writing monkey. D
I'll be wanting to see where this turns out! Plz update soon, and I'll be reviewing more often! (It's a refreshing storyline you've chosen, too.)
MWAH - Me.
| DillyShilly 4/18/06 . chapter 1
It was good, I'll be looking out for the story to see how it developes