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| Yaoifangirl 2004-03-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseOkay I won't diss you for amking Matt so evil (even though I am an EXTREME Matt lover) I ABSOLUTELY HATE SORA! SO I was happy that she died! But I love Yaoi, more Yaoi! With somebody! If it had to be Matt with a girl it woul dhave to be Mimi or Kari. Mimi is way cool and she shops! I love Tai and I love Matt Sora is horrible and thank you for killing her. I have to give it a 5/10 though cause you rushed it to much and you could described the area and what the character where feeling. I like the basic idea though that was good. Only Matt went insane, that I didn't like. |
| Alex 2003-09-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was pretty sad. Why did ya have to kill Sora? DEATH TO MATT! DEATH TO MATT! DEATH TO MATT! DEATH TO MATT! |
| Myotisman1 2002-12-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhoa its been a while. I'd like to start by apologizing for this fic. I was 10 or 11 when I wrote it and pretty lacking in every department of writing. I felt like flaming myself after I read it. Anyhoo, I was thinking about rewriting it, but seeing as I'm really not quite interested in this sort of thing, I'll just leave it alone and go on with my other writing projects. If you'd like to see some stuff by me and a few others thats much better, http://revrit.topcities.com Anyway, again apologies. It was an ok concept but it really needed much more buildup, much more of a climax, and just all around more details. |
| What? 2002-12-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat? How dare Sora say that Matt is an **? And it was not a logic reason to break up with Matt. This sucks! |
| Neostar1 2002-08-30 ch 1,  | abuseTHAT WAS TERRIBLE!!!! There was almost no plot, there was pointless cursing, and you killed Sora! *Takes deep breaths* Ok...Ok...Sorry about the above part. I really try hard not to flame. I don't mean to sound like a **, but that was one of the worst stories I have ever read. *Ducks* But that's just my opinion! And I DID like the Matt-bashing! DEATH TO MATT! |
| ??? 2002-01-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi. |
| knell poter 2001-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou made Matt so evil in this story. I like it! But why did you kill ofs Sora like that? Anyway, write more, until next peace! :) :) |
| kyrie 2001-05-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseok! that was sad. :( |
| rei 2001-02-05 ch 1, anon. | abusegraphic |
| digi*girl 2001-01-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat the HELLLLLLL???????Are you nuts??????Sora can't be dead!!!! Matt's not that cruel!! |
| Gina 2000-12-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseinteresting... Sora's dead!!!!! |
| Gato9 2000-12-25 ch 1, | abusewtf? this fic is poorly written. And I mean the ending. *rolls eyes* no offence but this is SO lame! But the outline of it was good. |
| rebellion_laosthug . 2000-11-20 ch 1, anon. | abuse sniff sniff that was a little sad that mother in head matt is just jealkous thats why |
| anotomus 2000-11-01 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is the worst peice of crap ever!!!!! |
| Moonlight Jellyfish 2000-09-13 ch 1, | abuseRevenge may be a powerful thing, but not half as powerful as this story. I really hung on it. Great work. |