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| honey-senpai 2008-08-20 ch 10, | abuseintressting fan fiction can not wait to read the next chapter |
| kcl 2008-08-19 ch 10, | abuseOverall, an excellent story. Its disappointing that it has apparently been abondoned. |
| Draeconin 2008-08-11 ch 10, anon. | abuse>Never fear – I am NOT going to stop writing on TSDW. But it's been almost two years! |
| BlackRoseFire 2008-08-03 ch 10, | abuseDamn... That was a very good chapter. I can't wait until the next one. I love this story. I can't wait until Harry meets Albus again. |
| Alka-Setzer 2008-07-19 ch 10, | abuseWell, hell. I was hoping against hope that this would wind up HarryVoldemort with an angsty/miserable/tragic end, but apparently not. (I have a particular weakness for that crack pairing for some reason) D'oh well. But, I do like fics where Harry and Voldemort are related, so woohoo for that. Normally, I'd criticize you a bit for making Harry so unreasonably superpowered, but I really like this for some reason. Plus, a bit of self-gratuitous indulgence is good every once in a while. I will say that the greater you make Harry's powers, the greater you should make his flaws, if only to provide some semblance of balance. |
| Mina Hikari 2008-07-14 ch 8, | abuseWhat a good story! I took a couple hours to read the 8 long chapters you had done and thoroughly enjoyed it. Good job, keep up the work :) |
| Holen-Snape 2008-07-13 ch 10, | abuseLove the story and hope to read more on it some day. thank you |
| Stars-Eclipsed 2008-07-10 ch 10, | abuseUm... update? Please? This could have so much potential... |
| LilyOng 2008-07-10 ch 10, | abuseHello, i would like to tell you that your story is very interesting and exciting though each chapter is quite long.Maybe try to shorten it or divide it into a few chapters. When are you going to continue this story? Hope to see you again soon. |
| storylistener 2008-07-08 ch 10, | abuseMy reaction to reaching the end of this chapter and finding out you haven't updated in almost 2 years was to growl, loudly. I am REALLY getting into this story. I like all the little things you add, like the fact that House Elves get a high when their Masters get a Power surge. PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!! |
| namarieeleni 2008-07-04 ch 10, | abuseOmg, This is the most amazing story i have read in a good long while. I hope you keep your writing up. Good luck with the NaNoWriMo challenge. :) Happy 4th of July Namarie |
| Dango-Chan 2008-06-30 ch 10, | abuseBy far, my most favorite fanfic. That's saying something, since I'm addicted to them. The flow of your writing read like a professional. The length of the chapters made me do a little happy dance inside. It's not often that I find a fic that's this long, or well executed. It truly was an enjoyable read. After reading this in it's current entirety, I find myself somewhat of a HP blood supremacist. Surprising, since I didn't really have an opinion before. But I like the whole concept of your 'Bloodline Obscured' inheritance. I can only ponder the results of those for later chapters. Pureblood!Harry is just plain win. That winnage just went up after reading the end of chapter ten. I admit, I kind of saw it happening when I read the scene at Gringotts, but I wasn't sure. I thought it was just my wild imagination running rampant again, but I'm kinda glad I predicted it. Can't wait to see what you do with the latent bloodlines... I love the way you write Harry. **, I like the way you write all your characters. The therapy sessions at the beginning were lulzy, just because I could see that happening in the actual books. Your portrayal of Dumbles is pretty refreshing, imo. It's nice to see someone who doesn't write him as a caring, compassionate old man. He's manipulative, and most people don't see it, let alone write it. I love this. I really do. And I'm at an unusual loss for words. That hardly ever happens, and only sometimes when I stumble upon a really good fic. Reading this made my day. I ** you not. It took a good portion of it, too. But it was definitely worth it. Definitely worth it. Even if this is abandoned, I'll eagerly await your next update. In whatever form it takes. ~Dango |
| ILikeComps 2008-06-29 ch 10, | abuseI'm really enjoying this story and do hope that you continue it! It is really interesting how the family tree is working and the partial dark Harry along with evil Albus. Thanks for sharing your work. |
| eoreos 2008-06-25 ch 10, | abuseWicked Awesome! This took me like 5hhours to read or more, but I enjoyed the challenge. This is such a great idea and plot and I hope you dicide to continue it! |
| Jgooullieyette 2008-06-22 ch 10, | abuseThis story is absolutely fantastic and I can not wait for the next chapter which will hopefully come soon. My favourite ppart of this particular story would have to be when Harry became sixteen and when Neville became sixteen. My least favourite part of this story would be Dumbledore. Plain and simple. I hate the man, not dislike, hate. Waiting Anxiously But Patiently Jgooullieyette |