i dont like...
though i know u will curse me...
still i wanna say this...
its been a long time sice u wrote this n u might didnt care anymore
but still..
i wanna say this...
hehehehehehe..
i dont like it but...
i loo0vve it!!

Excellent! I loved it!

It's beautiful, everything was right. This fic has made my night better. I always needed a dose or more of IchiRuki before retreating to be bed. This had done the job justly, I must say. Thanks for a great fic!

Maybe a longer one another time wouldn't be so bad.

wow, that was so cool!
your writing is spectacular!
im going to read another one...

Like it? More like love it. XD

Beautiful.

Saw this over at the ichi_ruki community. Good luck with the contest. :)

First, this is a great story. You are an excellent writer. I really like the imagery you wove, especially the final image of a bridge.

A couple of sticky points I noticed:

"It fitted perfectly Rukia, and her way to act with him." is awkward. I think I know what you are trying to say though. Does "It suited Rukia perfectly, and her way of interacting with him," work?

"Life with her was… funnier." Funnier is non-standard. Try "more fun" instead.

Final point:

"But she marked him with an indelible ink." Just beautiful. A fantastic line and wonderful mental image. I wish more native English speakers understood the power of the word indelible. Very nice.

Great job. Love the story (and btw, I also enjoy your insight over on BF. Thanks for shipping ichixruki!!).

Very good! It was a very well done retelling of their experiences from the beginning to the end. You did good on the details about their character and how they understand one another. Also, what they mean to each other. Keep up the good work!

Ooh, I love it! *__* Your stories always manage to put me in an excellent mood.

Good luck at the contest, this is a great entry!

P.D. Yay. I can't wait to read the next chapter of "Normality"!

if there is a kiss,i always like it...ajajajaj nah,I have liked it,a complete vision of all they have lived together :)