Hi again lol. Of all the stories you'd written, this one hits the first spot in my list so far. It had me cackling (and omg, I don't cackle over stories until now) through the night XD Although I was momentarily lost in their smart-ass retorts lol. And oh I just love their banters and so sweet moments! I especially like what you did on the last part ;) you totally got me there lol. I hope I'd see more stories like this in the Naruto fandom. Keep on writing!

Cheers,
Yesterday's Secrets

This fic... hadme laughing like a maniac at 12:38 am... and it's kinda hard to controll the urge to burst out laughing when everyone in the household is already asleep.

I loved the humor. I loved the plot. I love the writing style. All in all, I love this fanfic!

"And now, he's littering the road with dangerous concrete blocks that bear your name," Neji snapped.
oh Neji your to literal. hilarious tho

It was lovely, and extremely well-written, I loved it. :)

Good luck,

BR.

Bwah... dat was awesome. Never would have guessed Neji could actually posses human emo capabilities...:3

Thank you!

I LOVED the ending! suuuuuuuuuuuupr cute!

When I saw the love letter was signed by Boy George... I LITERALLY DIED OF LAUGHTER. IT WAS SO PERFECT.

This is definitely one of the best NejiTen out here. I find Team Gai all in character (even with just the passing of Ino and Sakura's name for the sake of comparing them to Tenten's beauty).

Neji's so rational and I'm glad he just lost it for a tiny bit (and not like in the other fics where he totally lost it by the end). Tenten's not mopey and Lee and Gai's plan are not that stupid!

And the letter plus Neji's reaction/opinion. Hilarious! The eyes that could arrogantly flaunt when you're asleep, would not rest except when he's sleeping, the hair etc etc - wth, I love everything about the letter! :))

I find myself smiling until the end of the fic (with some laughter along the way). And Neji surprised me also at the end. Not overly sugar coated that makes you sick. And I like that :)

awwwwwwww so fluffy and sweet! _

If I lived in the Naruto world, I just might be one of those secret admirers slipping pink envelopes into Neji's locker :) But he and Tenten are simply meant to be...and you showed that so well in your story! I can't stop smiling from the cuteness of it all. Lololol - and I just love Neji's concern (to put it mildly) over Tenten "love letter"! Brilliant :D

I seriously haven't laughed so hard in such a long time, I love Neji in this. Hilarious, great! Well-written, extraordinary, awesome, exceptional, I la la la love it :D

Hi,

I have to say that I really like this story. The characters are all IC, the grammar is great and I admire your style of writing very much. I especially loved the bit about the letter being signed by Boy George. Great touch. The pacing was good and the transition of the plot was smooth.

All in all, great job. I hope you keep on writing.

Happy writing,

Purple Phantasms

Hehhe, I love the "ears like dolphins" bit! Truly hilarious! And your poetry is pure... poetry! Hahah, love that not!

WoW! That was seriously awesome! You have a really sophisticated style of writing, one some published authors dont match! This fict was well rounded, especially the end since it concluded perfectly! I want more of your writing! I LOVED the funny bits, and although I'm going to get in trouble for not doing homework, this was totally worth it! THanks so much for entertaining me from homework!

This is a great story. U r a great writer. I hope that u will keep writing