Cool story, though some more action would've been good. Instead of ending it that fast. And also, I'm guessing you just watched or have recently watched Charlie's Angels, eh? ;)

I loved both stories Helping Fi and Danger. I would only change one thing. Bricriu is out of character in your storys. He would help but would have made a deal in which he got something out of it, would help himself in some way.

I think if you had him that way in your storys it would have made them better. But really loved your storys Write more stories.

good. but the ending seemed a little weak. _

Awesome story! I hope to see more writing from you in the future!

keep going. so far this is way better than you fanfic 'helping fi'. that one didn't last long enough or have a suficiant amount of detail for my liking.

Well, I hope this is the fifth review because I want to see how it tuns out! Hurry please!:-)

Please write more soon.

Great story! Can't wait to read more!

I like it! Please continue soon! I feel bad for Molly, though.