This is very nicely done...the use of these few words, whispered in hushed, tear-soaked tones just did such justice to the grief and guilt Farid went through!

Well done!

I'M GONNA CRY! (which is a shame coz I'm wearing mascara)

I LOVED IT SO MUCH!

So sad and true. Nice poem, thinking of sending it to the author? You should.

good, good...

I like it a lot but dustfinger (xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox) did not love mo in hte slightest

very nice, keep writing!

wow, kinda deep I think. I like it.

Aw, so sad! Haven't read Inkspell yet, but now I really want to. Pretty work!

Good gods. Im in awe. And I havent even read Inkspell yet. Damn, whatll be of the third book without Dustfinger? *coughs* This fic is simply heartbreaking.

DUSTFINGER DIED IN INKSPELL? NO!

WOW! As short as it is, you have captured the moment from Inkspell that most of just can't get enough of. Or atleast me, and I must say, out of all the fanfics I've read so far for inkheart/spell this one takes the cake. It's so simple yet defines everything, just what Cornelia Funke can do, yes, for the first time I've found an author who can capture the words Cornelia so wonderfully writes. Please, write more, or write another story! I would love to see more of your work out there because it's so rare when another can do what you just did. So please, write more!

Great poem! Update soon!

That's really good...sniff kinda sad tho

I loved it! It describes how he is feeling so well. Good work!

Nice. Poor Roxane, though! You spelled her name wrong! Haha, it was still really good.