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Pen En Garde
2009-10-10 . chapter 1
oh i love it ^_^ :) well done :D
SRAS9
2009-08-07 . chapter 1
Very good story! Good work!
Erroneously
2009-05-08 . chapter 1
I loved this line: "Kaoru proved that she was in control of the situation by bursting into tears."
Some people seem to manage fine when it's stressful, and then breakdown afterwards. Perhaps a kind of survival instinct?

Anyway, I really enjoyed this. Thanks :D
FenixPhoenix
2009-04-09 . chapter 1
Nice. I enjoy this. It's good that you showed Kaoru's strenght.
Brukaoru
2009-04-02 . chapter 1
Nice oneshot. :D
Kawaii-KeKe-Chan
2008-07-18 . chapter 1
Yes! This is the Kaoru we know and love, not some simmering dim wit that so many authors portray her as! And bless Kenshin, coming to find her because it was raining. He's such a little sweetie! I'm glad Kaoru kicked ass! A very enjoyable read! Kudos and thanks! ^.^
RedWingedAngel002
2008-06-10 . chapter 1
Aw XD That was so sweet XD

ARi chan
wittyying
2008-04-10 . chapter 1
well-written and in-character. Thanks!
gaap237
2008-01-24 . chapter 1
So he never got the letter? I was surprised that he hadn't showed up...
J Luc Pitard
2007-11-30 . chapter 1
I like the strength in Kaoru as you've written her and her faith in Kenshin. He doesn't show up until the end, but is still a strong presence in the story. I like the way her fears for him are unfounded. Nicely done.
ferryboat George
2007-10-10 . chapter 1
LOL, I loved this. It was hilarious and WAFF at the same time :P
Harlyn
2007-06-03 . chapter 1
This was written over a year ago, but I wanted to review anyway. Possibly my favorite portrayal of Kaoru in fanfiction to date- thanks :-)
Aliora
2007-05-05 . chapter 1
Oh! ::applauds:: This was simply wonderful, and I can't believe I haven't gotten around to reading it until now. I was favourites hopping and clicked on a few things randomly, winding up at your author's page. This one didn't seem familiar and I thought I'd give it a go, only to be sucked in by your always-excellent storytelling and wonderful characterisation. I loved the strength Kaoru displayed here and the exchange with Kenshin at the end was just too lovely for words.

As usual, fantastic writing - I'll be faving this one for re-reading pleasure. Thanks for the great fic!
malencia
2007-03-29 . chapter 1
That was cute. I liked it though is this a oneshot or do you plan on writing more? Thanks for writing. ja matta ne
piwqefjk
2006-12-15 . chapter 1
I like that story, just the whole way it ran xD Less of the damsel in distress - she could have made it back OK. But he was still there :D
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