Girly...do you know how long I've waited for you to update this thing!! Lol took only 3 years!

~Rain~

*dances around*
YAY! You update!
I'm really really happy, this has seriously made my day, and quite possibly my week, no joke.
I LOVE this chapter, becuase its the first really time Lexa says i love you to Jesse, which is really sweet. And Brennan proposed to Shalimar! i was happy about that.
Such an amazing story by such an fablous and fantasic writer/author.
I hope you update this story and your other stories again soon, becuase i cant wait to see what is going to happen next with this story and all of you other stories.

Karen X

Awesome story. Can't wait to read more. Post next update soon.

Can't say it isn't weird to see you posting here. Just checked the emails and had to rush to see it. Congrats on a great chapter,nice dialogue and sweet scenes. Hope to see more from this return of yours. Who knows, you may spark a slew of updates (or not). Hope everything's going cool. drop me an email sometime soon.

~F.Revenge

I enjoyed your story, but I think you run it a little too fast. You're advancing by dialogue only. Take a little more time with each segment. Describe expressions, gestures, tones - they can add more flavor. Re-read a favorite book from a writer's point of view, and see how much the non-dialogue descriptions add to the story; or even watch Mutant X episodes and see how much tone, inflection, a tilt of the head, a raised eyebrow, etc. tell you about what the character is thinking and feeling. You're visualizing it as you write, but as the reader I can't always see that. You've got some descriptions -- Shalimar's eyes widening, Jesse whispering, but I as a reader would like to know more of what they're feeling at that time. I guess I identify with this because I myself have had to overcome a tendency to rush from scene to scene.

I'm surprised a little by Brennan's reaction to the thought of kids, given the end of "The Grift". Perhaps Brennan was just thinking about the infant stage.

I think you and your story have a lot of potential. I'll look forward to the next installment.

This is excellent! I am dying to know what happens next! I am gathering from the previous evidence that Lexa dies but Shal and Bren are alive...which means that Jess found a cure. Please let me know what happens next!

Yet again i love this story hope you UPDATE it soon

I'm really, really enjoying this story and i hope you update soon because this was an excellent chapter.

wow thats a great chapter. i really enjoy reading this story. how did you come up with the idea for rose petal ice cream. have you had it before i wonder what it tastes like, anyways please keep writing.

Wow this is a really cool story. I think that your portraying Lexa and jesse really well. Keep updating please

Ok i love this story, like i do all of your other ones.
I cant wait to read more of this story.

Love the start of your story. Please continue writing it. Can't wait to read more

really good job i love it and i cant wait to read more

this is really good, are you just reposting this cuz i swear i have already read this but still it is really good