PLEASE WRITE CARLISLE'S REACTION!

lol such a great story!

lol funny story! i love it.

are you ever going to add to it? It's been YEARS... and also it doesn't match your summary... victims... OK then...

but very well written.

Awasome idea! WOuld you please write another chapter with Chariliese findingout?

Not the Volvo! Gir... Now she has to tell Carlisle about the garage... Poor Bella.

Wow. Loved it :D

Moon

It says complete. Does that mean you're not going to continue it, or did you just forget to switch it like I did? This is a great story, I don't want it to be over here.

-Rachel x3

haha..this is awesome! I love the message to it!

Keep up the good work

MJ

Wow, I love this. It looks as if s meyer wrote this herself! AMAZING. Pls write more!

omg that was really good and a little funny will you write the next bit with carlisle please i want to know what happens.

This is a remarkably well written short story. The only negative aspect I can point out is that it ended too soon. You really managed to get a feel for the characters and draw me into the plot. I just wish it was a great first chapter rather than a great short story.

Haha love the ending.

That was a great chapter it reminded me of Steph's writing! VERY well written and i really do hope you will write more! :)

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