This was adorable. Shorty clinging to Docks, and Docks showing him how to swim was touching. I think Spot and Red had it right. :)

that was a really good story! i liked it! it was short, sweet, and to the point. write more about these two!

Girl! This was so cute! I loved it! :D Shorty is adorable! *huggles Shorty* I...I don't know what else to say but I loved it! Oh...this is Jockey by the way if you couldn't guess. :P Wonderful work darlin'!

i like all da "looks"! keep on writin!

Sketch!

that was really good! you should write more with those two

It's cute! I like it! nice crisp one-shot. keep it up!

Meddling match-maker Spot is new to me, but he's cute.

-throws line at you-

Racetrack: That's not what she meant.

Maddie: xP And you would know? Seriously though, it was good.

B) I needed ta practice with those two anyway.

I-...Y-...

You are the Eternal. Evil. And, that line makes me think you'se gonna be takin' Shocks (Yes, there is now a shortened ... thingy ... for them.) ALOT further than 'fluff'.

...Spot and Red as matchmakers...is just to funny...*snerk*

It gives me images of them both in pink dresses with makeup. These...are images.

- GN