XD i love maureen :] and joanne and her cluelessness.

wonderful! i love maureen's little goodbye XD priceless.

awesome, awesome!

lmao that was great!

Oh how I love Maureen...and it provided some much needed relief from a deathly boring IT lesson...so thanks!

i have never laughed so loud in my life...thanks loved it

How funny! Poor Jeff! Good story.

LMFAO!
THAT WAS A GOOD ONE!!
Great Story!!
Update Soon Son!!

Aw...so cute!!

~Tina101

Hehe. Well, there's really no reason to blame Jeff. Joanne IS gorgeous. But Maureen was being a little mean about it...well, then I guess Maureen probably WOULD do something like that. I know for a fact she really DOES care about her friends, but Jeff isn't really a friend, huh? Anyway, this was great. Short, but sweet. :D

Love it. I give it a 5-star rating.

lol!!

i loved this story.

it was witty and also something i could totally imagine happening

good job!

oh yeah, that was amazing. Loved Maureen's reaction and what she did afterwards. Totally sometihng I could see happening. Great job!

HILARIOUS! That was amazingly awesome. XD

HAHA! THAT IS AMAZINGLY FUNNY! But one of the sentences bothered me... "She couldn’t help but grin wildly as his blush deepened." I don't like "...as his blush deepened." It sounds too mechanical, it needs to flow better. Just a tip I got from an amazing editor.

it was hilarious!

i loved it!

Very cute, though Jeff is kinda weird lol. Loved it!