 Aria657 11/8/10 . chapter 8Hilarious, I love the ending. They told a three month old baby a story he definitely doesn't remember, it was cute, great job! |
 4-eyedDragon 2/15/09 . chapter 8 Aww! This was sweet! I loved it! |
 walking-on-a-dream 11/8/08 . chapter 8cute story i really liked it. :D |
 Alec and Bella 4eva 9/27/08 . chapter 8I liked it why did you have to stop? Write another story like this one and I'll read it! :):I:P |
 Cynical about Cynicism 6/13/08 . chapter 1The story started off promisingly but somehow at the end I got the feeling that you rushed the story a bit...But the concept was good and OC's aka Jackie and Connor were funny! |
 Lilyflowerrff 3/5/08 . chapter 8good story! |
 summersgirl2526 8/23/07 . chapter 8awesome |
 Not Your Ordinary HP Fan 11/25/06 . chapter 8That was priceless.
And the moral of that story is:
NEVER. EVER. Not-even-under-life-threatening-situations let JAMES POTTER BABYSIT YOUR KIDS.
Runa |
 MoonPuppy4eva 11/13/06 . chapter 8omg that is so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so cute! |
 EvilAtHeart 11/13/06 . chapter 1awesome i loved it |
 Beckettsbabe09 11/1/06 . chapter 8I LOVED IT! |
 me 9/25/06 . chapter 8 cute, funny |
 redredreglasses 9/23/06 . chapter 8Your fic was so cute! I loved the last chapter! |
 Silver Moonlit Dreams 9/18/06 . chapter 8this was really cool.i hope u write more stories. |
 Cassandrawrrr 8/29/06 . chapter 8VERY GOOD! I think I'll reed some of yur other stories! I'm adding this 2 my faves 2! |