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Lonestarr 6/17/06 . chapter 1
Given the little bits of business in "Blush" and "The Full Monkey" and the whole 'K/R was planned from the start' thing (to say nothing of how he was swept under the rug in terms of "So the Drama"), it's pretty safe to say that the show's writers respected Josh about as much as the majority of the fans. I consider this shallow...Bonnie Rockwaller shallow.

You did a fine job of papering the cracks. For a first shot at fluff, it's not bad. Incidentally, it's not the only Josh/Tara story here, like my "Cutter's Way", for instance.
Arya MageFire 4/24/06 . chapter 1
LOVE it. BTW ,this is Silverwolf_93, I kinda changed my name.
Ace Ian Combat 4/23/06 . chapter 1
Hooray! A Tara/Josh fic. You know how to make my day, don't you? Glad I inspired you. Well, let's see here... You did an excellent job with the romance, much better than I could have done. Let's hear it for Middleton High's Second Cutest Couple! Oh, you've got me inspired, I'm gonna go write some and maybe I'll get some of my fics tied up. This is a badical oneshot, maybe you should do a sequel if you're up to it.
Aero Tendo 4/20/06 . chapter 1
I liked this fluffy story!

Too many stories have been different aspects of Kim and Ron, from holograms doing the kissing to synthoKim's at the prom. It was nice to see a totally different couple touched by Bonnie and a different view.

The music touch was done just perfectly too!

This story is so nicely done that it is inspiring me, just as you were inspired to do a fluff piece of my own. :) I can understand how Ace Ian inspired you, he seems really cool from the reviews he's done for my stories.

If you get a chance, check out my stories.

So to wrap all of this up I think you should do more one-shot fluff pieces like this one. You are a very skilled writer and I look forward to reading more of your works.
Longsworder 4/19/06 . chapter 1
What? No time travellers or power mad people? NO! Well, let's see your romatic one-shot then... Who's Jason Morgan? Everyone knows who Shego is surely! Kim's fought her enough times! I knew Bonnie would think something selfish like that! They took the world by storm then stormed the world! Poor Josh! His one true love. It's not your fault he's jealous, Tara. Just like Bonnie to be power mad. Exactly the same speech! No changes at all! Ah, the epilogical kiss! Why didn't they enter the gym? Oh, to add to the mood. Right. Poor Bonnie(!) Dateless(!) As this is a one-shot, I don't expect an update so... Good work!
Darth Comrade 4/19/06 . chapter 1
one complaint...this fic should not be a oneshot!

I like the plot, the detail and the new pairing. Very emotional and very well written, congratulations!

Your very first fluff and you struck a bullseye as far as I'm concerned!

P.S. I'm sorry its taking me so long to post the next chapters of my story but I've had a lot of personal issues to clear up first. I'll have it up ASAP!
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