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| omasuoniwabanshi 2007-12-07 ch 1,  | abuseWay to go Aoshi! I'm so glad Heather recommended this story to me, and that Kenshin finally started to listen to him. "Broken, lost, and drowning" describes Kenshin's mental state very well after Kaoru's death. Nice job! |
| HikariAlex 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good! I hope there will be more of this, because I can see a fantastic story coming of it. Your writing is really mature and well structured. A delight to read. Definetly more please! Alex |
| Heather Logan 2006-11-30 ch 1, | abuseVery nice; insightful! A "what-if", I guess. The thoughts from Kenshin's POV were heart-wrenching, and it's nice how you had Aoshi come for him. Indeed in the manga Aoshi has this certain insight into Kenshin's state of mind after Kaoru's "death"; it hadn't occurred to me that there was that symmetry in their experiences that is almost certainly the source of his understanding. |
| bluekitsune251 2006-05-31 ch 1, | abusethis is going to be continued, i hope. |
| Cattitude 2006-04-22 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! I hadn't ever thought of it before, but I guess Kenshin did help Aoshi to continue, hm? ^^ |