Has an interesting feel to it. I've been reading these stories for about 8 years now. The story has potential, and it has a lot of opening for conflicts and things to go wrong. Keep it up, I look forward to the next chapters.

Dj Ashitaka

Aw this is awesome! I cant wait for some more chapters!! Love the story please update again soon.

It's a bit too early in the story to tell, but so far you appear to be portraying a very intense narrative conflict between the traditional rivals in your story. The tension is visibly clear, and San comes across as a little wretched, withdrawn. I'd like to see how this story would turn out, so do please continue. So far so good.