loved it

Dios that was amazing my friend. Keep doing what you do.

Phoenix

How did I get into your story? I must have gotten it from somebody's favorite story list...usually I like my Cloud unadorned with magical stuff like wings etc,. I'm not too imaginative. But I stuck with it, even resisted the temptation to peek at the ending ('cause I don't do sad, either) so you must have cast a spell that pulled me in, and I give you credit where credit is due. thx mc

awesome! Really liked this.

Thanks,

Haleybird

This such a wonderful story. I love how you used the wings!

Yay! What a cute, sweet fic! Loved it!

I couldn't help but smile at the end it was so cute and it was so intresting no sappy crap it was so cool, and lovely, and I'm glad that you didn't say anything against Aerith because she's nice but she really does belong with Zack so I'm happy for the ending I really liked it.

Aw! I loved it! Now you just need a chapter where it tells what happens to everyone! But it was awesome! Good job! Serena

i loved your story! i just wish that cloud got to keep the wings in the end. so he could fly around!_

that was pretty cool! XD very well written! I was kinda hoping Cloudy would keep his wings though... Cloudy needs some cool wings!

I think your story is awesome. I really like the way you portrayed the characters. Keep it up!

My! What a wonderful story. I know this review is late as seeing that you had updated last year but a review is a review. Seeing Cloud with wings would be great but you can see like a devilish(Is that a word? O.o) wing on his left side in Kingdom Hearts. The picture with the red cape that torn at the end and the yellow claws on his left hand and then the wing on his left side(What's with Cloud and left things? The little wolf thing in his AC on his armor thingy is on the left and he got Geostigma on his left side as well! Maybe he's a lefty? O.o). Anyways, before I came up with this left thingy, this is a great story(!) as I repeated in the beginning. I hope you won't end the story here and update soon. Sorry about this long review!

Good job. I really enjoyed the story. Is it finished? If not, please finish it.

Nice story, but I do have ONE eensy little problem with it.

I'm not sure if the production staff at SquENIX have verrified the wolf spirit in Advent Children as being Zack, But I've been led to believe it's NOT. -shrug-

Hey, It's your story, but I've always felt it made better metaphysical sense if the wolf spirit was just that; a Spirit Guide for Cloud, if not Cloud's own spirit made manifest in the lifestream (his id or Super-ego).

Just a thought ;-)

As is, the story is bitter-sweet-cute though. Good work!

hey, this is a really great story

i absolutely love Cloti hehehe