brutal, gripping and realistic. wicked imagination and a truly beautiful creation. personally wasnt too fond of the going back to the past thing at the end and also felt more recognition could be given to harry. :)

reall e kool eo write more soon kk

Please continue :)

I've always seen your story on other people's profile but never bothered to read it.
Though now that I have I've loved it, it's great, and I can't wait to read the sequel.

great story, although there was quite a few unneeded plot twists and stuff that was just too cliche

oh poor Hermione! this story is so good!

Hi! I am very entertained by your story, and I like it a bunch. I have a question though. Why is Harry's patronus a stag? I know it was a stag in the book, however since Harry and his father are not close and Harry doesnt think of him too fondly, shouldnt his patronus be some other form? I'm not trying to nit pick at your story, I'm really just curious. This fanfic is very well written and I can tell you put alot of thought into it, I favoriting it.

I still didn't think it was satisfactory how little the Potters were made to realise things. considering. Nor that Daniel apparently got the last word.
I didn't want Hermione to die either and I really hope there's a sequel to this coming.
I would've preferred a clearer ending, some peace and conclusion at last. There's been so many chapters filled with unresolved unjustice and so little good things and good guys getting what they deserve.

Loved the story, hated the ending though.
Filius was a wonderful character, as well as the snakes; YOur writing is also very impressive.
I really enjoyed the build up of the story, Harry's relationship with Hermione, Filius, the Snakes, and even Dumbledore, hope you continue your writing

I love your story...

Great story, It could have ended with Daniel's "revenge" to be more dramatic and include the rest in the sequel.

My only point is why not use partial transformation (local skin patch) where the AK stike to counter it (as Harry had become so ggod at partial transformation), or do it on is hand and use is hand as a shield.

Well I like the way you write and how you skip this straight to Harry's seventh year but there are several things I don't seem to understand.

Like with the talents and skills you portrayed Harry to have... it's kind of hard to believe that he's unnoticed and neglected by the world. I know that this Harry Potter isn't a show-off and maybe in Hogwarts the highest students weren't posted for all to see. But it appears that the whole staff are actively ignoring him and taking things that he deserves. You even portrayed McGonagall, the fair and strict professor, holding a 'grudge/distaste?' against Harry. Surely someone in Hogwarts noticed his talents especially the staff. Heck there's no reason for the lot of them not to like him. His not a Malfoy clone. And being a brother of the BWL gives him a status in the wizarding world even a little. Also being a Potter gives him more popularity than muggle borns. And yeah I understand that James and Sirius may favor Daniel (seeing that he reminds them of their youth and arrogance) over Harry but Remus? Just can't see that.

And why doesn't he have any friends or even some acquaintances? Its not like Harry's also ignoring them. It's common for people who's whining and angsting that they lack attention of their parents to seek comfort through other people. Since he's in his seventh year now its highly improbable that he doesn't have any of those. Even Su Li has friends and she's describe as almost as a mute. Or how about Daphne Greengrass who the Hogwarts students named as 'Ice Queen' she also has her circle of friends/acquaintances.

The situation of your Harry seems like someone like Merlin, one of the founders of Hogwars, Albus Dumbledore or Voldemort depleted their magical core in casting something like a very powerful ignore-me-charm. Like for example the people in your story knows that there is a Harry Potter but the charm eventually forces them to ignore him completely. And this charm takes NO effect when Snape is belittling Harry or when Harry makes a mistake or when Daniel is standing near his unconscious body for all the people to see that he just saved the world when in fact it was Harry. Bloody Hell! His even lower in loser ranking compared to Crabbe and Goyle. Sorry but Harry seems like a push over and I'm just expressing my opinion.

I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too. I would love to see what you have next in the series too.



Thank you,


Terri

Harry's an idiot... -_-

Its an interesting plot youve got here with Harry been ignored by the rest of the world... XD