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Vinsmouse 4/22/06 . chapter 2
Good chapter, not surprised to see Malfoy involved. What a creep. Looking forward to the next chapter, please update soon.
coymelody 4/22/06 . chapter 2
AMAZING! I loved it. ofcourse, waiting for more.
Ragna ICEland 4/22/06 . chapter 2
Um, there are just a few things I'd like to point out:

you spelt Lucias, where there's supposed to be Lucius, and ally (which is a friend-coworker-thingy), instead of alley (I used to do that myself all the time and now the word haunts me) and then there's one more thing, which really doesn't matter but I think could make the story better by one tiny little detail: It was in the 1st chapter, Dumbledore used the word 'okay'... I don't remember him using that before and it just seems so un-Dumbledore-ish to me. But you know, maybe he does use it... I only read the books translated so of course I don't know...

Anyway, I really, really like your story and I'm really curious about what happened in the past and what'll happen to the brothers, so do update asap, please!
Narysse a'Jahar 4/22/06 . chapter 2
Oh, lovely. The oh-so-noble Death Eaters themselves have arrived. In my opinion, things are NOT looking the greatest for Frank and Joe...
Fflur Cadwgawn 4/21/06 . chapter 1
Definitely a great start; you're staying true to both series and doing them both justice. Great job.
Mouse In The Corner 4/20/06 . chapter 1
very good update soon!
coymelody 4/20/06 . chapter 1
Hooray! You are one awesome writer. I love the Hardys and I love Harry Potter. Waiting for more.
amethyst 4/20/06 . chapter 1
wow! nice chapter..please keep updating...and don't tell me frank and joe are actually wizards! tht'll be really something!
Vinsmouse 4/19/06 . chapter 1
Great start, got me hooked. Looking forward to more, please update soon.
angry penguin 4/19/06 . chapter 1
Chapter one is magnificent. I'm so very curious now.
Ragna ICEland 4/19/06 . chapter 1
Impossible -maybe not. Weird -oh, yeah. But the word that comes to my mind is 'dangerous.' I remember someone who started off with a HB crossover with HP and LotR but I haven't seen anything of it for the longest time. In fact, I think the author deleted it. But I hope you have thought this out and won't quit in the middle because I very much like it. I hope you update as soon as you can.

Also, I'm glad the story the story is not set after the 6th book...
josie hardy 4/19/06 . chapter 1
ok..cool. I was wondering if anyone would try a Harry Potter crossover. Interesting start, I like it - Update soon!
lightwarai 4/19/06 . chapter 1
Wow! This is really good so far, and it's just an introduction. I really hope the rest of the chapters are a little longer, or that you post often! There are a few typos, but they don't really distract from the story. I have only seen the first three Harry Potter movies, and not read any of the books, so a few of those details are a little confusing to me right now, but otherwise, this is really good! I can't wait to read more!
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