 Gileonnen 5/21/01 . chapter 1Great job! (Sorry you didn't like my suggestions much . . . ah, well!) It's still an excellent fic, for sheer virtue of the ideas you put in! |
 Twilight and Silence 5/21/01 . chapter 1Hehehehe . . . this was cute. Original idea. |
 Dove 5/21/01 . chapter 1 good, but i like mine a little more- none the less, very good! |
 Galadrial Shavaugn 5/21/01 . chapter 1 It was good, quite funny. |
 Me 5/21/01 . chapter 1 I like it! That was a great idea and it was so cute! Gotta question though. More of a comment really I guess, Don't you have to wait till you're 4 months pregnant before you can tell the gender of the baby? Ok so i guess it was a question. lol Overall i think it was awsome and can't wait for your next work. |
 Julie Weasley 5/21/01 . chapter 1Oh! That suprised me! I thought she was like psycho for mintue! LoL! Great story! It obviously took a lot of thinking! |
 Lisa5 5/21/01 . chapter 1That was predictable, but good. :) |
 Moondoggy 5/21/01 . chapter 1 Aaaw. That was so sweet. One question though, If James was away for over two months and Lily is only two months pregnant...I'll let you do the math. |
 Mandy 5/21/01 . chapter 1 Very Nice! |
 EvilFairy 5/20/01 . chapter 1interesting, great title, i really thought she was seeing someone else! |
 Melpotter 5/20/01 . chapter 1 cool
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 wmlaw 5/20/01 . chapter 1It was real cute. I take it Harry arrived early then? Just like James's kid to do things unexpected. Lily was quite the little minx wasn't she? |
 Guy Fawkes 5/20/01 . chapter 1 Auughh! This is so cute! That's wonderful! My day is complete! |
 Lily White1 5/20/01 . chapter 1quick question... how can she be two months pregnent when james's been gon for over 2 months? |