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Gileonnen 5/21/01 . chapter 1
Great job! (Sorry you didn't like my suggestions much . . . ah, well!) It's still an excellent fic, for sheer virtue of the ideas you put in!
Twilight and Silence 5/21/01 . chapter 1
Hehehehe . . . this was cute. Original idea.
Dove 5/21/01 . chapter 1
good, but i like mine a little more- none the less, very good!
Galadrial Shavaugn 5/21/01 . chapter 1
It was good, quite funny.
Me 5/21/01 . chapter 1
I like it! That was a great idea and it was so cute! Gotta question though. More of a comment really I guess, Don't you have to wait till you're 4 months pregnant before you can tell the gender of the baby? Ok so i guess it was a question. lol Overall i think it was awsome and can't wait for your next work.
Julie Weasley 5/21/01 . chapter 1
Oh! That suprised me! I thought she was like psycho for mintue! LoL! Great story! It obviously took a lot of thinking!
Lisa5 5/21/01 . chapter 1
That was predictable, but good. :)
Moondoggy 5/21/01 . chapter 1
Aaaw. That was so sweet. One question though, If James was away for over two months and Lily is only two months pregnant...I'll let you do the math.
Mandy 5/21/01 . chapter 1
Very Nice!
EvilFairy 5/20/01 . chapter 1
interesting, great title, i really thought she was seeing someone else!
Melpotter 5/20/01 . chapter 1
cool

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wmlaw 5/20/01 . chapter 1
It was real cute. I take it Harry arrived early then? Just like James's kid to do things unexpected. Lily was quite the little minx wasn't she?
Guy Fawkes 5/20/01 . chapter 1
Auughh! This is so cute! That's wonderful! My day is complete!
Lily White1 5/20/01 . chapter 1
quick question... how can she be two months pregnent when james's been gon for over 2 months?
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