Woot! Yes I, Sky Korat, have finally finished reading every profile necessary to understand the basic framework of Naruto... I shall begin my review now...

I love Ayako's persona, and the tone of your story is very down-to-earth which made it an appealing read. I'm hoping to see an update soon, kk?

~Sky Korat~

Yo! -raises hand like Kakashi-
its always a pleasure to review stories that deserve the review.
this chapter seems a little on the boring side but still great.
keep up the great work!

SnowNeko Out! -poofs away-

interesting.
this is getting good.
update soon!~

this is good!
you can go far!
update soon!~

I really enjoyed reading this story and I'm excited to see what the next chapters will hold. Nice job! The 4th chapter was probably my favorite so far. Keep it up!

-Skamish

sorry if i offended ya, but what i ment by longer chapters is...just making the updateing a bit slower and making the chapters longer :D, you dont have to if you dont want to, but thats my advice, again soz if i ofended ya

what i meant by longer chapters is more envents or more detail, although i consider it very good in detail. you never know if ya gonna be good or not untill ya try or you will never get better unless you keep on trying.

♪♥»SnowNeko«♥♪

its good, make the chappies a bit longer plz, but otherwise, 'tis good, updates soon plz

alright a little suggestion: try to make the chapters longer. as for the writing nobody is perfect and just keep it up the way you are because its great. i hope ya keep on writing with this story because i, for one, really like this story.