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| Reviews for Not A Team |
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   The Check Mark 5/2/06 . chapter 1A very good story, but not very long Try expanding on what you have here, and it could be a really good story |
| Bloodclaw 4/30/06 . chapter 1 wow that was probably the shortest fic ive ever read |
| Story Weaver1 4/21/06 . chapter 1 That makes a a lot of sense. I like the way you wrote it, each of their thougts followed by the Snake nin |
| Sheo Darren 4/20/06 . chapter 1 Somehow I find the entire scene morbidly funny. You're definitely the master of this kind of fic. Short, straight to the point and quite entertaining while at it. And surprisingly deep, too. Great work. |
| YATTE 4/19/06 . chapter 1 KAWAII! UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE ! |
| Azamiko 4/19/06 . chapter 1 ...That jerk... |
| The Violent Tomboy 4/19/06 . chapter 1 Awe...that is so sad...I feel sorry for what he did to them. |
