|Reviews for Not A Team|
| The Check Mark 5/2/06 . chapter 1
A very good story, but not very long
Try expanding on what you have here, and it could be a really good story
| Bloodclaw 4/30/06 . chapter 1
wow that was probably the shortest fic ive ever read
| Story Weaver1 4/21/06 . chapter 1
That makes a a lot of sense. I like the way you wrote it, each of their thougts followed by the Snake nin
| Sheo Darren 4/20/06 . chapter 1
Somehow I find the entire scene morbidly funny.
You're definitely the master of this kind of fic. Short, straight to the point and quite entertaining while at it. And surprisingly deep, too.
| YATTE 4/19/06 . chapter 1
KAWAII! UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE !
| Azamiko 4/19/06 . chapter 1
| The Violent Tomboy 4/19/06 . chapter 1
Awe...that is so sad...I feel sorry for what he did to them.