hurray! can you make another Namine Roxas fic?

Awesome oneshot!

'forced her 'not real' heart to slow down'

That line sounds funny and tragic at the same time. It's one of things I like about your style.

I like your idea about her first thought too.

Cute, tragic, but cute.

aw

sweet namixas

nice work

fel

Very poetic. I like it.

aww! that's so sweet!

Aw...that was really nice...

Short, yet powerful. Very touching. Well done.

Mina

As usual, you blow my expectations away, Yami, because as usual, this has the simple beauty that makes your work shine. The last line was lovely.

Avalon