 Randomly-Lame-Username 3/6/09 . chapter 23Aw! You evil shit! You cant honestly tall me it ends there! |
 Lamae 10/21/07 . chapter 23Excellent. Waiting for more. I liked the flashback scene in the last chapter. |
 Lamae 10/21/07 . chapter 20:D sorry I haven't reviewed in such a long time. Computer stuffed up. Brilliant chapter as always! |
 ananymous 8/24/07 . chapter 1 I'm enjoying this story. You do a really nice job with developing the plot.
In terms of constructive criticism, you should really pay attention to spelling and grammar. There are so many instances of using the wrong words (e.g., "waist" when you mean "waste", "weather" when you mean "whether", etc), that it detracts from your great story. A beta would help a lot! |
 Tyranusfan 8/11/07 . chapter 23Glad you updated. This chapter seemed a bit of a detour. Interesting, though I'm curious how it fits in.
Update soon! |
 JoyofReading 8/7/07 . chapter 23So Dean has a future wife? Good. So I'm guessing the Jo in question is Jo Harvelle?
Good update like the story about Dean. |
 exitlight 8/6/07 . chapter 23Oh interesting twist! |
 Spuffyshipper 8/6/07 . chapter 23 Good chapter.Update soon.Nice twist at the end. |
 exitlight 6/16/07 . chapter 22Wow. Continue please! |
 Spuffyshipper 6/16/07 . chapter 22 Good chapter.Update soon. |
 Fafa Fai 6/16/07 . chapter 22Wow great episode. John has to know, I love when Daddy is feeling guilty. JAJAJA Dean is so sweet with his little brother. |
 JoyofReading 6/16/07 . chapter 22Good background bit on Sam. So he was a cutter for a long time it seems. That's why "Dean" knew that Sam would slit is wrists. Good job. I can't wait for more. |
 Poaetpainter 6/16/07 . chapter 22wow. how sweet and sad at the same time |
 Poaetpainter 6/15/07 . chapter 21oh man. Way to leave it like that! Pssh LOL.
Can't wait for the next chapter! |
 Fafa Fai 6/15/07 . chapter 21What? no no no go back NOW..please :sob: I want more. |