FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| microwaved noodles 2007-11-23 ch 1,  | abuseI've been writing a history to Duchess myself, and thought I'd search the FHFIF section to see if anyone had beat me to it, and I found this. Curse you!! xp Just kidding, just kidding. Mine's quite different from this one, so it's all good. ^^ But about your fic: excellent. Really, very very good. The thing I like best is your writing style is that you have a charming voice and a nice way of wording things. Your sentances are solid and lengthy, but not run-on's. I couldn't find any grammar errors, nor any puntuation or spelling. Kudos to you! All of this, combined with your apparant in-depth canon knowledge of the show, a heart-wrenching plot, and great emotions make a fantastic fic. Great job, and I'll be adding this to favs! -Audrey |
| Zim Del Invasor 2006-04-22 ch 1, | abuseI liked that alot. |
| ravengal 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuseAmazing idea for how Duchess became evil. *claps* I applaude your brilliant mind. ^_^ Most people just skip right past Duchess and assume she was CREATED evil (including myself *coughs and looks away*), but you've opened my eyes to a new possibility... a NICE Duchess! *adds to fave authors because of this and Teen Titans stories* |
| Cutelilteen 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseAww, that's kinda sad. :( Good story about how Duchess became so mean. |