I am a terrible reviewer. I keep trying to think of something to say about your story that shows great insight, but I'm rarely that clever. Let me just say that I enjoyed it. thanks for writing.

Overall I enjoyed this story. Not sure where the Edmund story fit into the whole thing though? You have a very nice, easy to read flow of the story. It was an enjoyable read, I thought that your painted a picture in my head of the story without being overly wordy. I am looking forward to reading your other two Voyagers stories in the near future.

Glad to see that you have Jeff as a persistant kid. I knew that eventually he'd get into that Quarterdeck. You really have a knack for nailing down the sarcasm between Bogg & Jeff. I wonder why they landed into a Green Zone? I guess that I'll soon find out. I'm really enjoying this story!

Oh no, Edmund got found out. But it was only time before that was going to happen anyway. Glad that you had the captain 'somewhat' as a compassionate person in regards to the situation at hand, because it could have been much worse for all of them.

OMG!! Now THAT'S a shock! Never saw that one coming! I wonder how Edmund hid that fact from the rest of the crew. I guess that I will have to read on to find out. You really painted a good picture of life aboard this ship. Nice work.

Great spin on the tone of the story. Just like you wrote in your story religion can be a touchy topic and I felt you did a nice job with how you used it in context of the story. Nice Job!

Poor Jeff, getting upset over the Verne situation. You have it right though, sometimes setting history straight means someone might have to get hurt. I liked the quick red light situation in this chapter. Nice work.

Wow, a subject Jeff only knows slightly about. This ought to be interesting to see how they figure out how to get Joan back on track. Funny how they always encounter people who talk so freely to strangers about the 'state of affairs' whenever/wherever the boys journey. Looking forward to reading this story.

very nice! Felt sorry for Jeffrey, though, when he did learn he liked Joan.

Had to keep remembering that Jeffrey was a twelve year old kid and NOT an adult!

good work!

Excellent! I loved that story. I too am a writer and wrote "Voyagers of the Golden Age" which I believe is still on one of the Voyagers websites.
I thought it was interesting how they continued to go through history informing Joan of her mission, reinforcing it, being two people she might have expected instead of always simply introducing themselves and having to explain who they were, where they came from, etc. From that perspective it was very unique. I also think you could have tied the two women dressing as men theme together more, i.e. they could have learned something from Edmund that they would use later with Joan when she dressed as a man (i.e. helping her to dress as a man, how to get by, maybe she would almost get caught like Edmund and they would have thought how they could've gotten out of that one, so they will apply this to Joan).
Excellent work, again. I really enjoyed it and will read more.
Chris

Congratulations on finishing another one. Again, no shortage of ideas here, though the Edmund sequence doesn't seem to blend in as smoothly with the rest. Was "women dressed up as men" the common theme here?

Great story good ending !
I can't waite for your next story , whatever it is I'm shure it will be good!

I think it was time well spent , I enjoyed this chapter verry much !
I liked the part about the soft bed because in the show they almost never landed on one.
Update soon!

Good ending , don't get me wrong I'm a big Bogg fan but it's just a flogging he was a pirate so a flogging will not be so bad .
Bogg was made the captan of his own ship once before his life as a Voyager , and his crew liked him because he was just like one of them so one more scar wont hurt much.
Bogg could get the Omnie back faster men respect a man that can take a good flogging!
Great work on this chapter update soon!!

Hmm. Jeffrey had better get the Omni back fast, or Bogg could be in for a difficult time. The ideas in this story continue to be interesting, though I'm not sure how all of this is ultimately going to tie together.